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rockthecliche August 6 2010, 01:35:35 UTC
oh my god did i love this so much. yoko has always struck me as being terribly underappreciated for who he is in k8, and this fic. this fic. the love for him was absolutely amazing and wonderful and so rightfully deserved. everything fit together so well, the little comical snippets that brought the story a few laughs amidst the somber tone throughout -- seriously, this was so enjoyable. ♥

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ryogrande August 21 2010, 07:16:15 UTC
thank you so much, i'm glad i could pull them off. :3

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pashoshi August 6 2010, 03:02:52 UTC
Aww, that was cute. Yoko and his insecurities and the whole group trying to make him feel better (except for adorably grumpy sleepy Ryo). ♥

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ryogrande August 21 2010, 07:16:56 UTC
xD ryo does need his sleep. ;) thank you!

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debrogliewave August 6 2010, 11:08:44 UTC
ashldflkjsllkl AWW YOKO. There will be more comment later when I am not on the hotel's awful evil wifi, but for now: 8D thank you so much!

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debrogliewave August 10 2010, 19:50:33 UTC
Okay, time for a real comment!

First, I LOVE YOU FOREVER FOR WRITING YOKO! <3

Second, I LOVE YOU for using that song...I hadn't even thought about it for Yoko but wait, he's turning thirty, isn't he!

And lol at Yasu and Maru watching fanvids. They WOULD. XD

He’s never once doubted that, not when Subaru tells everyone who will listen how awesome Yoko is and Hina is practically attached to his hip at every waking moment (and some non-waking). The younger four look up to him even though Yoko has no idea why; he’s just as immature as they are and everything he knows about life and the real world he’s learned with them. Even Uchi still texts him for advice, whether it’s difficult work-related decisions or whether or not to hit on the cute girl at the hair salon/grocery store/mechanic. (No, the answer is always no!)
^I love this whole section, describing everyone's relationship with Yoko. It's so sweet.

“She was a bitch,” Hina adds simply. “A mindfucking, pride-stealing bitch.”Protective Hina makes me go all AWW ( ... )

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ryogrande August 21 2010, 07:18:20 UTC
eeeee i'm so glad you liked it. :3 i waffled forever over what to write you - you gave so many options! in the end, yoko won out. i'm really happy that it was received well. thank you for the comment and the request! ♥

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bellemainec August 6 2010, 13:08:33 UTC
this was lovely lovely lovely, and Yoko needs a huge hug, and I am so glad that K8 is there for him. ANd as for the "her" wow, what a bee-yatch, and I am thinking that Hina may just beeyatch slap her if he sees her anyway. How could you say such horrible things to someone, least of all someone as cute as Yoko?>!?!?!? Lovely job, well done :)

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ryogrande August 21 2010, 07:18:54 UTC
i would not put it past hina to do something like that. xD i'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you!

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beltenebra August 6 2010, 17:45:54 UTC
This was incredibly wonderful and sweet!!

“Because he’s playing a nurse,” Yasu explains, and next to him Subaru lets out an “ah” of understanding. lmao. I love that this makes perfect sense in YasuBaru land. <3

“She was a bitch,” Hina adds simply. “A mindfucking, pride-stealing bitch.”

“Tell me how you really feel,” Subaru says to him seriously I can just see this interaction, it's so perfect. I love Hina's ferocity. <3

His family never liked her anyway. Perfect, perfect ending. I adored the way their closeness just shines through in every word of this. So much love. ♥

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ryogrande August 21 2010, 07:19:34 UTC
thank you! :D

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