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shawnlyndsey August 11 2011, 22:33:42 UTC
Ok this is soooo FLAIL-WORTHY XD I love seeing Aiba and Yoko together XD

"You're an idiot."

"And you looooove me~"

This--*falls over laughing*--too perfect XD

And:

"Get us a job in Australia and we're in," Yoko answers, "...Aiba wants to meet a kangaroo."

Awwwwww YOKO XD Seriously this was absolutely beyond-words AWESOME!!!!!!!!

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greatfountain August 24 2011, 13:59:20 UTC
thank you so much!! yoko&aiba are the perfect combo for idiocy. i'm really glad you enjoyed this! :D

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orenji_kiseki August 12 2011, 23:10:37 UTC
Oh, I don't even know where to start! No, wait, return. I do know XD

I LOVE IT!!! ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ I laughed every two sentences, it was a very entertaining read <3

I never expected to receive a Yoko/Aiba <3 I know I put it in the things I like, but they were the last possibility I didn't even dream of receiving! With using them only, you have me already melting at your feet :D but then the idea! Yoko and Aiba as burglars? and working together? a wonderful idea! oh how I enjoyed the peek on their everyday life of crime! I think I squeeked at every little thing, like Aiba picking a lock to bathroom when Yoko's insideXD I really enjoyed the fragment about Aiba's mom asking them about their job and actually knowing what they do! and I adored too see the way they fit as partners - all the details, like Yoko admitting that even after ten years he still didn't feel in synch with Aiba who always ended up doing something crazyXD or when I realized Aiba is usually the one responsible for sneaking in and doing the physical part of the job, while ( ... )

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orenji_kiseki August 12 2011, 23:16:55 UTC
/here's the second part of the comment, it seems I didn't fit into a single one, oh my!

Oh and the rest of them was great fun too. Nino, with his great sneaky ways and comments <3 (and the main duo never realizing the possibility of Nino being behind it as well XD) and that bit about our burglars duo giving him a present for his retirement? XDD awww XD I love when a relation between criminals and law officers looks so close and playful like that :D I like how you included Jun and Sho and Ohno into the story, I could imagine their lifes just from reading the description of their homes (or galllery - in Ohno's case XD). Especially Jun as the biggest Micheal Jackson collector, treasuring a PINK t-shirt with an autograph, awww! The best third-plan's Jun's role ever! :D ( ... )

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greatfountain August 24 2011, 14:10:26 UTC
This is your first exchange?! Then I'm really glad I was able to deliver something you liked!

Ahhhh I'm so bad at appropriately responding to flail, but basically: I really wracked my brain for what to write you, and then the possibility to Yokoba the burglars came up and it just kind of... ran away from me, haha. The rest of Arashi hopped in halfway through planning and... yeah. Suffice to say this was a blast, and I'm really really really glad you liked it. :)

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orenji_kiseki August 27 2011, 22:47:35 UTC
I think I had a lot of luck and I feel like saying it one more time: I LOVED IT TO PIECES <3 I never use memories, but for this story I really consider making some good use of them!
The idea was awesome and I can only hope you didn't have troubles when coming up with something because of my descriptions that left maybe too much of freedom ^^; but awww burglars Yokoba <3 I can't truly feel sorry if that's the effect *__*
Again, thank you! <3 <3 <3

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greatfountain August 24 2011, 14:02:22 UTC
me especially :l;;; I'm really glad it worked, that's the most important thing for me from an AU standpoint. (I'm glad that part was appreciated! ;D)

Thank you! This was a ton of fun to write and I'm glad other people enjoyed it, too, haha.

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