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track_04 August 14 2010, 17:39:39 UTC
This was cute took a sort of slice of life approach hat you took a sort of slice of life approach to an office au--it gave a really good snapshot of the setting and their personalities.

Nino the office prankster and Aiba the research scientist were great! Also, Ohno's mother dressing him. XD ♥

I also loved this exchange:

Jun didn’t bother to look up from his perusal of the morning paper. “How many times have I told you that when we’re at work you should call me Matsumoto-san?”

“I’ve lost count. You’d think that you would stop wasting your time, considering the data indicates that no correlation between the number of times you make the request and the likely effectiveness of the request on my behavior exists”, the taller man replied cheerfully.

Only Aiba can be adorable and a smart ass at the same time. ♥

Great read! Thanks. :D

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beltenebra August 21 2010, 17:12:27 UTC
Thanks! I had a lot of fun with the prompt. ^_^ And I Never don't like Science!Aiba.
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fancyann1974 August 14 2010, 23:50:07 UTC
so cute and funny
thank you for sharing

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beltenebra August 21 2010, 17:12:51 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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amhrancas August 17 2010, 02:10:39 UTC
you can’t be in here right now. You’re clashing with my everything.”
This is me officially stealing this line for future dismissals from my presence.

“And there was a post-it stuck to it that read ‘Not casual enough’
*snort* XD
that is just awesome. Poor Sho..

I love your science!nerd Aiba to pieces, as well! X3

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beltenebra August 21 2010, 17:13:46 UTC
::grin:: I also liked that line, it's very imperious.

I also love Science!Aiba! Thank you so much for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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moonbyrd August 17 2010, 02:26:17 UTC
Super cute!!

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beltenebra August 21 2010, 17:14:09 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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beltenebra August 21 2010, 17:16:37 UTC
::smile:: I'm really glad you enjoyed it! I find one of the challenges of doing AU well is making sure the people still read like themselves so if parts of their characters still rang true, then I am thrilled!

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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