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ky_rin December 27 2008, 06:53:07 UTC
This is really sweet! ♥ I love Yamapi's thought process, acting and all that: a little heartbreaking, in a good way. &hearts!!!

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ryogrande January 1 2009, 08:48:03 UTC
thank you so much, i'm glad you liked it. :D

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swtjemz December 27 2008, 07:22:10 UTC
jfa;sfj;aslfk

I TOTALLY LOVE THIS. Their first kiss and Yamapi's train of thought and his realization that he loves Jin. *_____________________________*

*FLAILS A LOT*

Never stop writing PIN. OMG.

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ryogrande January 1 2009, 08:48:39 UTC
I TOTALLY LOVE YOU. <3333

thank you for this, and everything that you do. ♥♥♥

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procreational December 27 2008, 07:50:22 UTC
adjgkhsjkgkhsgushjbkslhggnskjkhjghjkdhndfjlsjksl honestly I really can't offer anything more intelligent than that but...something about this hit so hard I don't even know. God, I don't even have words djgk it was touching, moving, profound, ADORABLE, a little heartbreaking, and omg gratuitous junior loving! :( So cute. ♥♥

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ryogrande January 1 2009, 08:51:02 UTC
oh thank you so much, i'm glad you liked it. i don't usually write in this style and i'm glad it was well-received. :D your words really made me happy, thank you for commenting. ♥♥♥

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tokeruyouna December 27 2008, 12:10:51 UTC
Breathtaking. Thank you. And thank whoever stared a recycling program for pinch hits.

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ryogrande January 1 2009, 08:52:45 UTC
thank you very much, i'm glad it came off the way it was intended. :DDD

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javiera December 27 2008, 14:32:01 UTC
Heartbreaking in a good way. Someone above said that and it's completely true. This was beautiful and a very nice way of finishing this christmas exchange, because the pin fics totally ruled this year, all of them were wonderful!

I love stories from Yamapi's POV. They're always a little sad, but when you throw Jin (and Ryo) in it somehow it shines anyway. This was no exception and I was thinking the same thing as Jin here, you're *late*, Tomo-chan, because you read it and know the story has to end like it does, Yamapi just need to realize it and catch up. It's lovely how the juniors keep showing up through out the fic pointing out for Yamapi was he's missing and what he should be doing!

Great work!

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ryogrande January 1 2009, 08:54:32 UTC
i remember this comment made me so happy. i don't usually write this seriously and i'm really glad that my intentions came off okay. thank you for taking the time to leave a comment~♥

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javiera January 2 2009, 04:57:57 UTC
Well, seriously works for you, so you should try it more often ^^ only if you want to, of course, but this was really great! &hearts&hearts

(lol, your icon rules XD)

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