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shatteredtenshi December 26 2008, 05:16:07 UTC
aljsfhasljfhaslfja I LOVE THIS. I'm not great at leaving long responses or put my reactions into words, but know that I actually read this twice before I could write my comment because I was afraid I missed something when I read the first time.

I knew it was Hiro from the beginning. XDDD It's sooo cute, Hiro wanting Taisuke to confess to the rest of KisuMai.

Still, he can't help but notice that neither of them are laughing quite as easily as they used to. and but Kitayama looks pleased, and when he smiles, Fujigaya realizes that he hasn't seen him look so genuinely, purely happy in a long time.

And like this, just a little touch of angst undertone, and it was like alsjfhalsjfha.

Yara x Taisuke x Gocchi pwns. Seriously. //dies// I was so close to writing that for myself, but now it's in this fic~ I don't have to write it. XD I'm also amused that Nika and Kame played a part in it because I wrote Kame x Taisuke and Nika x Taisuke recently. XDD It's like you read my mind even though those were actually fic requests I received.I ( ... )

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liangzhu January 11 2009, 07:33:16 UTC
Aaaand, a really late reply (clearly, I'm not great at commenting on things either).

I've liked Kisumai for awhile, but I really wasn't confident about writing them in the beginning, and I actually stalked your journal a fair amount for translations and pictoral motivation, so thank you for those! XD

I don't usually write angst at all (or if I do, it's ALL angst and dark and moody and generally not a holiday sort of thing :P), so those bits were kind of random last-minute additions. But I guess they worked, so yay! XDD

A snippet of Yara x Taipi x Gocchi part was actually one of the first things I wrote (and I was really expecting it to not be porn - how silly), and after that, I think I saw a mention of them in your LJ... or maybe it was just that you'd made an icon of them, which, still! I thought that was a good sign.

And, yeah, I'm really glad you like the fic! ♥

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shatteredtenshi January 11 2009, 08:39:28 UTC
(lajsfhas WHAT SERIOUS? TAI-CHANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN alsjfhalsfjhasfaJEALOUS. I love people calling Taisuke nicknames. Good ones at least. Like, Wataru called Taisuke Gaya-kun recently, and I like flailed really badly. But um, not the point. alsjfhaslf JEALOUS ( ... )

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tsukikipin December 26 2008, 20:46:06 UTC
I was gonna be sad if it wasn't Kitayama in the end. XD But I figured it had to be because he was the only one who hadn't been in any of the other... "exhibitionist and voyeuristic tendencies". XD;;

But omg! That was amazing. <3 I've been wanting to read a good Kisumai fic lately. :o

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fenlings December 29 2008, 01:24:48 UTC
Ahaha, this is AWESOME. I'm still not too sure about who everyone is in these groups, but that didn't stop me from enjoying your clear characterizations. Your Yara was AMAZING. I want to steal him. And Takki and Senga - wow, so in character it's scary.

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bu_yao_ren January 2 2009, 02:46:31 UTC
Yokoo smiles serenely, or as serenely as he can with a grin that always threatens to grow into something toothy and shark-like.

I almost died.

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dritree January 5 2009, 21:49:20 UTC
OMG THIS IS AWESOME!!

It the fic didn't already that last line just killed me!!
And it all turned out all cute and everything in the end!! ^^**
♥♥

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