a;lkdjals;fjalskdfjalskfdj OHMYGOD. I WAS JUST TALKING ABOUT THIS TWO DAYS AGO. BEEN WANTING A NEWS ORGY FIC WRITTEN FOR LIKE EVER. ALDKFJASLKDFJALSJDF. THANK YOU ANON-MOUSIE! *_________________* *FLAILS*
Getting this prompt really was a lovely opportunity for me, since I'd also been wanting a NewS orgy fic forever, and this provided the perfect reason to write one. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
what an odd coincidence that the orgyfic was posted on christmas day!
i don't know where to start. i would flail, but the whole thing was just so incredibly well-written that i need to address that first. Yamapi's POV was amazingly well done. I don't normally like Yamapi but you made me love him. Fucking love him. So much. Even though I doubt he has a gag reflex, haha, which is honestly the only part of this I questioned.
I love how it was all so natural. It didn't seem forced and it didn't seem completely because of the alcohol. I love how Koyama is hesitant and Yamapi has to throw him into the fire. I love how Massu is like IKOU~! and immediately falls asleep. I love Shige/Ryo and Tegoshi and and. Where was I? Oh, yes. Well-written. Very. The scenes and dialogue flowed together and didn't have that "now, in THIS corner!" effect that you usually see in orgyfics (guilty >_<). I am honestly impressed that you managed to keep it all in Yamapi's POV
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I love how everyone broke out their orgy icons to respond to this story. :-) Thanks so much for the incredible feedback. Really, I can't tell you how pleased I was to receive this--even if it did make me blush rather a lot. Your comment about Yamapi's lacking a gag reflex made me burst out laughing. Also, I was a little concerned about the POV, so I'm especially glad to hear that that worked for you. Thank you!
Oh, and I tried to check out your stories only to discover that your journal was friendslocked. Do you have any of them posted publicly?
i don't keep my fics on this journal, and i'm kind of wary about associating the two in a public forum, but if you get new friend notifications you will see that i added you to it~
i try to be as descriptive as i can in my reviews to other people, because i know i love it when people do that to me. ♥
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peroxide is so luck to have this given to them :(
but omg.
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i don't know where to start. i would flail, but the whole thing was just so incredibly well-written that i need to address that first. Yamapi's POV was amazingly well done. I don't normally like Yamapi but you made me love him. Fucking love him. So much. Even though I doubt he has a gag reflex, haha, which is honestly the only part of this I questioned.
I love how it was all so natural. It didn't seem forced and it didn't seem completely because of the alcohol. I love how Koyama is hesitant and Yamapi has to throw him into the fire. I love how Massu is like IKOU~! and immediately falls asleep. I love Shige/Ryo and Tegoshi and and. Where was I? Oh, yes. Well-written. Very. The scenes and dialogue flowed together and didn't have that "now, in THIS corner!" effect that you usually see in orgyfics (guilty >_<). I am honestly impressed that you managed to keep it all in Yamapi's POV ( ... )
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Oh, and I tried to check out your stories only to discover that your journal was friendslocked. Do you have any of them posted publicly?
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i try to be as descriptive as i can in my reviews to other people, because i know i love it when people do that to me. ♥
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Thank you very much! I really appreciate that.
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