Team Future, Prompt 5: I can't help to say it would be pink and gray

[game_referee]

Title: this is me, you’re everything else
Pairing/Group: Kame/Ueda (KAT-TUN)
Rating: G
Warnings: Vagueness, nonlinear timeline, futurefic
Summary: Kame comes to Ueda with a proposal.
Notes: This is kind of messed up, because I don’t really know how to make it chronologically sound and still make the impact I intended-to be honest, I had a hard

Comments

[scorch66]

L o v e it <3 was on my phone earlier

First of all I'd like to say: PFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFT.

And now for coherence: When I realised this fic revolved around the makings of a KameDa duet, I was in pain. A great, OMGYESWANTWHYYOUNODELIVERLIFE way, all my happy twitching when reading this. ♥ I love how you utilised the prompt; it was completely unexpected. And the way Kame was enroaching on Ueda's territory but Ueda learned to put up with it (at least more maturely), and the confession scene, my heart. In fact, you had me melting at the Christmas scene alone. I loved the way you wrote their contrasts (sometimes I feel like you’re much more than what you seem to be, sometimes I wish that you were less than what you are was my favourite, along with the lines used in the title of the fic ♥) and the subtle meta was great. Like, it suddenly dawns upon him that Kame probably works best with people who seem to be the opposite of him. -> ♥ Plus, the contents of Kame's red folder were so accurate *snickers* and UEDA'S VERSION OF REMIXING

[alienashi]

this is a VERY late reply <33333

thanks a lot for the kind comment U___U you're the angelicest angel ever you're like leeteuk to my heechul ilu

[asmea]

beautiful story ♥

[alienashi]

thanks! <3333333

[alternatejess]

Loved it. Beautiful, beautiful piece of work. I love the details you worked into this, the way Ueda caresses the piano before he opens it, the colour coded cabinets, ueda finishing kame's bento etc etc. I loved how so few words tell a story of such emotional depth. I loved the non linear timelines in this - then again I have always loved non linear time lines - and how the scenes really read more like a collection of photographs that carry so many memories. I really enjoyed how you brought the two together - through writing a song! And Kame's idea! I loved the characterizations in here, even that one little scene of Junno. I really liked how you wrote Ueda too

[alienashi]

VERY late reply, but thank you so much for your comments! (haha your favourite prompt) i really appreciate your detail comments and feedback *_*

[wintersdancer]

This was beautiful. Period. No other words are needed

[alienashi]

cora you're the sweetest dfghjklkjh

[yukimahou]

I really enjoyed it. You captured their characters well, theres a reason I like these two together and I like the depth you had in such little words

[alienashi]

thank you so much!