This was great! I really don't know much about NEWS (but I was super happy to see all of the members mentioned! Yay, group love!) but I really enjoyed watching Massu and Pi find each other. I like that they met by accident and I love how Massu is just 'yay, this is going to work!' and Pi is more '...okay, but I hope he doesn't slack of anyhow color blind weirdo'. I like how Pi comes to a better understanding of his own work, and the results of it, through his injury and yet it doesn't change him (not entirely, because hew as already changing).
This is really a great job of world-building, too. It's rich and detailed and things are explained but not OVER-explained. Nothing gets in the way of the story. That takes a lot of skill to pull off. I really, really enjoyed reading this story.
the best word I can describe this fic with is extraordinary. (and for some reason everything was doused in red or blue in my mind. >.>) this universe would make for such an intriguing movie. it also feels like a long love declaration to massu (which is just fantastic, I don't think anyone can read this without getting a little smitten) and jealous!-but-oblivious!pi was really quite amusing XD I do feel rather sorry for ryo though, scary stuff. >.>
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This is really a great job of world-building, too. It's rich and detailed and things are explained but not OVER-explained. Nothing gets in the way of the story. That takes a lot of skill to pull off. I really, really enjoyed reading this story.
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