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Prompt 1: For Your Ears Only - Team AU

Nov 02, 2008 09:21

Title: For Your Ears Only
Rating: PG
Pairing: RyoJin
Summary: Is it possible to fall in love without ever speaking? Ryo and Jin think it is.
Prompt: Kanjani8 - Osaka Rainy Blues
Warnings: None.
Notes: Thanks G. for brainstorming with me, I'd never have dreamed this up without your help.

( It was a freezing rainy night three years ago )

team: au, round 1: prompt 01, character: ryo

Comments 4

lip_stick_love December 3 2008, 19:51:13 UTC

Why is no-one commenting?!

This was quite, quite *lovely*. I loved the melancholy atmosphere, the lonely feel of it, and the ending was divine (if totally GUTTING). Gorgeously written too.

Thank you so much for sharing!

xxx

flamesword December 10 2008, 23:53:30 UTC

Ahhhh, I love you for this, even if it's sad at the ending! ;.; maybe there is more to the story, somewhere...

I love this pairing, and there is so little of it. Lovely, great job! ♥

rhythmia December 14 2008, 08:25:41 UTC

Oh, that ending is a gut punch! D:

I like that there's a lot left unsaid, bits in between the lines to fill in about how they got there, the notes in between breaths where the two are communicating with each other somehow. Not my group(s) that I usually follow, so I treated them more as characters, and the feeling comes across clearly even though I don't have a clear vision of them. The dreamy, viewing-through-drizzle atmosphere really surrounded me as I was reading. Well done. ^_^

tinybars December 14 2008, 23:17:55 UTC

I liked this; it has quite a lovely yet sad mood. Normally I'd want to know more, but the story is handled so nicely here that I'm actually quite content the way it is. And I enjoyed the characterisation, especially Jin's.

So happy to see this pairing ♥