[FIC] Broken - Part. 3

[je3vous3aime]

Title: Broken
Length: 3/3
Author: je3vous3aime
Rating: PG-13 (due to implied pre-rape happenings)
Genre: very dramatic drama
Summary: Getting equal is a natural human want, but will a person almost blinded by this desire be able to see that he is going to far before he destroys a innocent family, or will he rage on and foolishly crush such a

Comments

[moon1084]

OMG i totally read straight thru and didnt comment. i was petrified for jaejoong. girl power Charlotte!

[moon1084]

ok this was great! you should write mooore yunjae like this

[je3vous3aime]

I'm planing on it, thank you so much ^^.

[moon1084]

happy endings like this though lol but with all that suspense

[sheilapiglet]

it's short and sweet...alot of stuff happened in just 3 chapters...it was quite action packed throughout...you're good at building up a climax and describing the story in detail as it flows along...I loved the girl power!..hehe...looking forward to your future work=)

[je3vous3aime]

wow, thank you so much!! I'm really glad you liked it ^^. Please do continue reading my fictions!

[chloe1910]

Wow..Charlotte is damn cool. I am so glad the cops arrived in time...

[jaerin17]

OMO! I didn't leave a comment on the first two chapters because my heart is racing and pounding so much for Jaejoong. I felt so scared of the possibility that Jaejoong might get, you know? I'm so relieved that he did not. Girl power to Charlotte! I thank her so much. Happy ending for YunJae and their son, Junsu! Yeah!