[FIC] Broken - Pt.1

[je3vous3aime]

Title: Broken
Length: 1/ 5
Author: me
Rating: PG-13
Genre: angsty
Summary:  Getting equal is a natural human want, but will a person almost blinded by this desire be able to see that he is going to far before he destroys a innocent family, or will he rage on and foolishly crush such a peaceful existence?
A/N: For some odd strange reason i got the idea

Comments

[je3vous3aime]

lol. i think thats the idea. thanks much for reading :)

[ara_niey]

EWWWWWWW~
that guard is a pervert!!!~

where's yun anyway?who would abduct him anyway?tsk..

continue then!~^________________^

[je3vous3aime]

that was the reaction i was looking for!!!

i will continue soon ♥

[rainy_love]

O.o!! I hope Yunho will come to save Jaejonng for this pervert T-T...OMG I want to jump on this guy and strangle him !!! Who can abduct Yunho?? ¬¬' I'm sure it's this Seung and his friend just to have Jae for them >[!!
Waiting to know more ^^

[seekin4therapy]

uwaaaa, gross disgusting guard guy~~!!!! u leave joongie alone, u beast! kid!junsu is just adorable, all i can picture is little inhawn running about :) can't wait for the next chapter! <3

[chloe1910]

Seung sounds like a sick pervert! Don't tell me you are gonna let Seung rape Jae!

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I forbid it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Why oh why are everyone so cruel to Jae? His husband just went missing and some sick bastard is sizing him up! Can I bitch slap Seung and kick him in the balls????????????????????????

No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I don't want Jae get rape!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Someone please come and safe Jae. Yunho sounded a little mysterious here. Wonder what really happen to him.