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It’s a Lie That Tells the Truth

Oct 10, 2011 15:27

Title: It’s a Lie That Tells the Truth
Author: Antares
Summary: After the fiasco with the replicators, Daniel has a long … talk with Jack.
Word Count: appr. 7800 words
Rating: NC-17
Written For: SidljPrompt:1. Angst / 2. R or NC-17 rating / Optional Request: have to overcome something within the relationship / Restriction #1: no mpreg / Restriction # ( Read more... )

ficathon_viii, genre:episode_related, writtenfor:sidlj, rating:nc-17

Comments 7

green_grrl October 10 2011, 14:37:17 UTC

Ooooo, that's one of the most intense moments in the series, and you've built a rich background around what happened. Only Daniel could come up with as much stress after Jack's near death as the near death itself!

antares04a October 12 2011, 19:59:35 UTC

Thanks a lot for your nice feedback! And yes, leave it to Daniel to creat new stress after the first stress is gone. *g*

sidlj October 11 2011, 17:32:50 UTC

YAY! Oh, wow, I don't know how you managed it, but the tension in the scene with the submarine was palpable even though I knew perfectly well how it was going to come out in the end! (I've always loved the fact that it was Daniel's hesitation that gave Thor just enough time to come to the rescue. Daniel's love literally saved Jack's ass!)

And speaking of asses, I love this line to bits and pieces: Yep, today he owned Daniel’s ass…and he was going to nail it to the mattress. It's shivery good that Jack's going to give Daniel exactly what he's asking for.

And, oh yeah, that works so well! Daniel wanting to be held down. Guh.

Yasureyoubetcha Daniel will be able to put all thoughts of fishing right out of Jack's head! :-D

antares04a October 12 2011, 20:01:51 UTC

Thank you very much for your nice words! I'm glad you liked the story. I found out I'm better at writing humour than angst. *lol*
And thanks a lot for letting me know you liked the opening sequence, it's always difficult for me to write something which is so close linked to an episode - and not only give a summary of the episode.

Thanks a lot!

sidlj October 12 2011, 20:08:12 UTC

I found a note I'd scribbled for myself while I was reading the story but forgot to mention before. I really liked Paul's line: "Done and done." I just plain loved Paul altogether in this story!

antares04a October 14 2011, 11:29:15 UTC

I really liked Paul's line: "Done and done."
I let my beta know! *lol* In my first draft he said "Fine" - and then Shazz came up with this line. *g*

But thanks for loving Paul in this story. *g*

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antares04a October 17 2011, 06:52:29 UTC

Thank you very much for your lovely feedback! And I have a soft spot for Paul Davis. *lol*

Thank you!!