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Fic: The Dances of Uzume

Oct 12, 2009 23:56

Title: The Dances of Uzume
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author:advection, ficathon_vi, genre:action/adventure, writtenfor:theemdash, rating:pg-13, season:7

Comments 36

Love this! chattycatsmeow October 13 2009, 16:22:26 UTC

Great, Jack thought. It's the Flying Wallendas fresh from their kendo class.

LOL!! Excellent action story.

I know you've been faking it by substituting data for subjective recollection. This is a piece of data. I know it's in there. Over."

I love the thinky!Jack in this. I love how he's been analyzing Daniel based on empirical data and comparative analysis and coming up with the right answers.

I love the history lesson embedded in the defensive moves Jack sees Daniel making.

And I really love that this incident is the catalyst for the return of Daniel's memories of Jack.

Re: Love this! paianfic October 16 2009, 12:58:29 UTC

Oh, yay. Thank you for the wonderful feedback! :-)

The Dances of Uzume green_grrl October 13 2009, 16:26:33 UTC

Daniel looked into Jack's face, and his eyes were filled with recognition ... and affection. I know you, they said. You're the pain in the ass that crazy shit like this happens to me with.

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

I love the way you highlighted that fabulous physicality Daniel came back with, and grounded it in years of SGC training--muscle memory training that he can remember while he doesn't remember anything that might slow him down.

And I love this planet! Airships and bamboo swords! I'm betting that, disarmed, Daniel has the two fighters who came after them charmed, turned around, and halfway to a trade agreement in no time. :D

Re: The Dances of Uzume paianfic October 16 2009, 13:00:44 UTC

Oh yeah -- Daniel definitely will. :-)

Eeee, I'm so pleased that you liked the planet! And Daniel's hand-to-hand chops, and his moment of recognition.

::smishes you for the lovely feedback::

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paianfic October 16 2009, 13:01:05 UTC

Thank you so much! :-)

lazigyrl October 13 2009, 17:49:54 UTC

Daniel looked into Jack's face, and his eyes were filled with recognition ... and affection. I know you, they said. You're the pain in the ass that crazy shit like this happens to me with.

I just love that, how Jack can see in Daniel's eyes that he remembers him after all the crazy they just went through.

Flying Wallendas - so Jack.

paianfic October 16 2009, 13:01:47 UTC

I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this. Thank you! :-)

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paianfic October 16 2009, 13:06:00 UTC

lol! More crazy shit is on the way. *g*

Thank you so much for the lovely feedback, and for keeping those Acme candles lit at the St. Coyote shrine. ::laughs and hugs more::