Title: Strawberries & Whip Cream: The Secret Weapon [Part 5: FIRE]

Mar 13, 2010 22:17


Title: Strawberries & Whip Cream: The Secret Weapon [Part 5: FIRE]

Author: JCapzona

Rating: NC-17

Pairing: Callie/Arizona

Disclaimer: All television shows and other copyrighted material referred to in this work, and the characters, settings ext. are the properties of their respective owners. This work is non-profit and simply written for ( Read more... )

fanfic, calzona, arizona, greys anatomy, arizona robbins, callie, sara ramirez, grey's anatomy, robbins, callie torres, jessica capshaw

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arizonafan March 14 2010, 07:58:11 UTC
WTH?????? Callie that you made
this is bad very bad super bad

yeap wants to scream to somebody ¬¬

JCapzona
if you should probably look for a cigarette
because these in problem

PD:I continue depressed by the 6x17 and this doesn't help

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jcapzona March 14 2010, 09:40:31 UTC
LOL It's ok. I knew as I was writing it that I was going to get shot by some anti-angst people. I'm sorry you've plummeted more into your post-6X17 depression! But I promise I'll make it better in the next one! =)

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djrach March 14 2010, 08:37:49 UTC
Pretty sure I can guess what's going on with Rory, but I don't wanna ruin it.

Oh Ari how the tables have turned! This should be fun :)

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jcapzona March 14 2010, 09:42:11 UTC
Yeah, it's not entirely unforeseeable. I wanted to keep it light angst so I tried to dampen the sadness of it all~ so no one gets suicidal on me, especially after the 6X17 incident.

Poor Arizona though, she's so distraught even though this is HER game to begin with. I'm sad for her =(

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superbutterfly7 March 14 2010, 08:42:26 UTC
I think it's gonna be ok. Arizona just walked in on what she thought of as on-call-room-sex but I think it's something different entirely, and good for Arizona and her lack of wheely sneaks. I just read the last 3 parts all at once and they're all wonderful!! Great job. I especially loved jealous Arizona and her voiceovers. Cannot wait to read more and you're amazing for updating so fast!

I'm still experiencing post-6.17 depression though.... 11 days....

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jcapzona March 14 2010, 09:45:38 UTC
Haha Jealous Arizona rants are the most fun to write! It flows so nicely and it's so cute cause you can totally picture her rambling from anxiety!

Voiceovers are really fun too so I'm glad you like them! Loved the voiceover at the end of 6X17 so I thought I should start doing those again in my fan fic.

Ahh yes, post6X17 depression has hit us hard. Well what can I say? We DID ask for drama, now we must suffer the wake of it =(

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loveaz March 14 2010, 09:33:22 UTC
You know I should be soooo mad at you... first four chapters were so funny, but this...well this was NOT funny... Especially not to Arizona... I think Callie is way out of line here... Even if it's only friendship...That's just too much for Az to handle... I'm pretty sure I know what's going on with the RORY THING :). MOOOORE SOON !! :)

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jcapzona March 14 2010, 09:48:12 UTC
Awww loveaz I knew you would be mad =( I'm sorry. That's why I was holding the cigarette+lighter in fear as I posted it. First four chapters was prior to my 6X17 depression. I blame my dark and twisty on it!

AND YAY! For someone finally sticking up for ARIZONA! I knew I would get some much needed Arizona support from you!

Yeapps! Next update will be up tonight, which for me is more like tomorrow night since its 3am now. But next update will also most likely be the final update =)

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loveaz March 14 2010, 12:04:46 UTC
Last chapter ??? Why ??? But that story is so great and funny and sexy and everything... WHYYYYY ??? As for the depression... Well I'm in a very dark and twisty place now... Drama sucks... And I don't know if I can handle that...

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jcapzona March 14 2010, 12:35:34 UTC
haha aww yeah i know but i want to end it before it gets tiresome and overly twisty with plot manipulations which is what i would have to do to extend it =(

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stargazer89 March 14 2010, 11:13:51 UTC
Oh, I forgot to say on ff.net - loved your Arizona voiceovers! personally being a bit of a pyromaniac myself, i absolutely loved the metaphor. ♥

(PS this is your fellow grey's/friends hybrid fan, diam0ndsinthesky =D)

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jcapzona March 14 2010, 11:28:36 UTC
haha PYROS ftw. Thankss! Appreciate it! I like the voiceovers, they're extremely fun to write because as you're writing it you can hear it in your head. I know that comes across as rather schizo but true words nevertheless!

Ooooh I like the reoccurring theme in your usernames. Very cool haha.

Thanks for reviewing!

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stargazer89 March 14 2010, 11:34:48 UTC
lol schizoooOo =P no, I know what you mean - I actually did think about why you specifically wrote "**Arizona voiceover**" At first I thought, why didn't you just have it as a normal opening paragraph for the chapter? but then I realised that when I read it I did actually hear Az's voice and I wouldn't have if you hadn't written it that way =P very effective.

Haha, thanks - I have an affinity for stars! =D ♥

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