Comments | jazzfic: Fic: Intravenous (Firefly: Mal/River, PG)

jazzfic

Fic: Intravenous (Firefly: Mal/River, PG)

Jun 21, 2006 18:06

Last one guys...and I was really enjoying these too! Guess I've got no excuses now for not working on this other fic. But I promise it'll get finished. Maybe after tax time ;)

Intravenous, PG, 1220 words
For whatever_we_are who requested Mal/River, infirmary, healing. This was a funny one, didn't turn out quite as I had intended. But that's not always a bad ( Read more... )

mal/river, fic, fic: firefly, requests

Comments 15

bookaddict43 July 5 2006, 06:25:34 UTC

I love the ending "just the anti-hero at work" it so typifies Mal. I like River's knowledge as well, her listening to the heartbeats is wonderful.

jazzfic July 5 2006, 06:41:15 UTC

Cheers! Thakyou for reading, I'm happy you liked it :D

raincitygirl July 11 2006, 17:24:08 UTC

Aaaawwww. This fic is so unbelievably CUTE!

jazzfic July 12 2006, 01:19:04 UTC

Aww. Thankyou!

sawasdeekha November 4 2006, 04:59:19 UTC

Again, another fantastic piece of work!

I love the way you start with a light-hearted touch of humour on what is a fairly serious situation, albeit - as you point out - an unhealthily regular one for Mal that borders on routine!

Rivers silent presence and promise not to disturb him is so sweet and I love the way she passes the time listening to the air con.

The whole piece is peppered with small admissions and acceptances from both sides, so even though Mal says it's a bad idea, you've left us with the feeling of possibilties.

I love the way you write these two - particularly the fact that you don't ignore that River is intelligent even if her wiring is still a bit muddled.

As with all your work, stand alone fic is just not enough and I'm left wanting more! :o)

jazzfic November 4 2006, 06:26:19 UTC

*g*

Cheers! Thanks heaps, I'm glad you're enjoying them.