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jazzchyk

[Fanfic De-Anon] Do No Harm 5/?

Jun 28, 2011 15:27

Title: Do No Harm
Author: PhantomMemories/JazzChyk
Genre: Angst/Drama
Rating: For now, T for language reasons
Warnings: USUK, Language, implied past sexual activity.
Summary: After an attack on America, the personification vanishes. (Kink Meme De-anon request for Amnesia and Doctor!America. Original request here.)

( Hope is a little thing with feathers... )

deanon, do no harm, axis powers hetalia, fanfic, uk/us

Comments 6

kang_jae_gyu June 28 2011, 20:39:47 UTC

Oh crap. D:

Someone needs to delay China, and fast!

yamijk June 29 2011, 00:08:48 UTC

Gah, suspense! Hope the next one is up shortly.

shibbyone June 29 2011, 02:51:21 UTC

Hope is the thing with feathers-- that perches in the soul, and sings the tune--without the words, and never stops at all, and sweetest in the gale is heard; and sore must be the storm-- That could abash the little bird that kept so many warm. I've heard it in the chillest land, and on the strangest sea; yet, never, in extremity, it asked a crumb of me.

...I adore Emily Dickinson. Please excuse me. (My journal header is based off one of her poems.) This was just heart-wrenching, although I'm surprised that America was just so accepting of hearing about someone he knew in the States.. but I like the way this is developing, I want moooooooorrrrrreee :D

jazzchyk June 29 2011, 13:58:48 UTC

(Not the first time I've used that particular poem... <3 Love of New England poets is showing.)

I think part of the acceptance is rekindled desperation. As far as he's concerned (And Miss Nettie) there are sixteen years of his life that are unaccounted for, which includes the potential for family that has become part of the death toll, or are alive somewhere and think he he is part of that number.
There is no paranoia as a part of his life right now, he doesn't know that anyone would even want to manipulate him. He's just a doctor, as far as he's concerned.

(Besides-- Miss Nettie wouldn't have offered to put them into contact if she hadn't believed they might be the real deal. She's good like that.)

kasumicc June 29 2011, 04:40:47 UTC

OMG CLIFFHANGER /dies

This story keeps taking me between believing Alain's indeed Alfred and not believing it...however, I was close to tears with his conversation with Arthur ;w; But oh God, cliffhanger ;O;

sephydark June 29 2011, 08:23:59 UTC

Nooo, China! He needs to be stopped, and fast!

Oh man, when England called Al... their emotions must have been all over the place then, both of them. I sincerely hope that they manage to convince him not to go to Korea, although with what's happening to him, I'm thinking they might not have to.