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nmhotel21 November 11 2010, 22:54:16 UTC
This is so freaking sad.

I just want to get Kira some real help. DX

Kira really does seem like this in the manga, and if he didn't have his duty as a vice captain I could see him slipping into this sort of apathetic life.

I'll take a guess that the female friend is Momo and her boyfriend is Aizen. And Kira's ex lover is Gin.

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jazz_trousers November 11 2010, 23:01:32 UTC
I'm sorry it made you sad. Should I put an extra warning for sad? I don't know..

Exactly! I have always thought that about him, poor little lamb.

And you are correct on all counts, but you missed a couple! XD

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nmhotel21 November 11 2010, 23:09:16 UTC
Nah you put up the warning for angst, you should be fine.

Renji's boss= Byakuya, hot sister= Rukia. Is that everyone?

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jazz_trousers November 11 2010, 23:13:16 UTC
Yay!! You got them all, well done.
Your prize is... uh... *looks around* some balled-up tissues containing my real tears. Although I like how this fic came out, I didn't really like writing it.
(I prefer happy!Kira and Shu skipping along, holding hands <3)

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tylashke November 12 2010, 06:41:56 UTC
xD No appropriate pic. Anyway, this was poignant and canon Kira does come across like that, wallowing in self-pity and angst.

Also, don't worry about writing stuff based on your experiences. I guess everyone does that at some point and it's part of a necessary process of reflecting and healing.

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jazz_trousers November 12 2010, 14:59:34 UTC
Thankyou!! I agree. Kira is an angst-merchant if ever I saw one, but I normally credit him with a little more inner strength than this to be honest. He's a brave lad and I feel a bit bad about writing him as a hopeless case... Oh well.

That's sweet, thanks :3 There is a sizeable chunk of myself in this fic, although hugely exaggerated. Plus I feel Kira has more reason to be a miserable fuck than I do, haha. But if I write about what I know, it'll come across as authentic at the very least, ne?

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