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[jazz_trousers]

Author: jazz_trousers
Title: Honey and Lemons
Rating: PG-13 for language and reference to past sex.
Pairing: Byakuya/Renji
Warnings: Un-beta'd. Fluff. Sickeningly fluffy fluff.
Summary: Byakuya sends Renji home because he's too sick to work. So why does he drop by his house that evening? Surely he can't be concerned about Renji's wellbeing? I hate myself for writing

Comments

[tylashke]

Nice Bya/Ren! ^^ I like all the sensible/logical but sweet stuff Byakuya tells Renji.. It just seems so in character. =)

Also, mind if I add you as a friend?

[jazz_trousers]

Aww thanks! Of course you can ^^
I was worried I'd written Byakuya a little too tsundere here- "I'm only snuggling you because you need to keep warm, it's not like I LIKE you or anything... baka!" lol.

[finalay]

It's heart-warming. I like how you portrayed Byakuya. :D

[jazz_trousers]

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed.

[only_dani]

Originally posted this in the wrong place, so I'm trying again...

oh man this was sooooo cute! I love Bya/Ren, and you write Byakuya so very well. I think I was in the mood for a little hurt/comfort too and it was delivered with such honesty that it made me smile and go 'dawwww' through most of it.

You also had some really good lines that just... suited them really well.

Renji had let Kuchiki-taichou bend him over and fuck him in the ass emotionally for years now, so the literal act was just a logical conclusion.

This made me laugh. It's just so them, Kuchiki fucking him until it starts to happen in other aspects of their lives.

they'd made... not love. But something.

H-how did you put so much emotion and framework into 6 words?! seriously!

and then...

"I am merely ensuring that you maintain a decent body temperature. Go back to sleep."
".....'Kay."hahaha! Oh Byakuya, wanting to comfort Renji and still trying to keep it all professional and aloof

[jazz_trousers]

*fans self with hands over-enthusiastically*
Thank you so much, that means a lot from such a great writer!

I've never actually written these two before (mainly because I'm such a Renji/Ichigo fangirl) but... I dunno. There's something about this pairing I can't deny. Plus I love vulnerable!Renji for some reason.

I want Nurse Byakuya to feed me soup in bed

[only_dani]

I wouldn't mind having a Byakuya nurse serving me soup when sick either!

and awe shucks *shuffles feet* thanks for the compliments on my writing. I like the way you write though, you say a lot with so few words. I personally find it hard to do that.

[sscullys]

I loved this one. I think you portraid Bykuya very well, still stuck up ass but sweet :)

[jazz_trousers]

Thank you so much, glad you thought so!

[lyingfiend]

This was cute!! =) And i really LAUGHED at this, "He smiled at the onlookers and even waved to a few"!! Hee, it was such a Renji-moment!! And grumpy Byakuya asking him to stop it, hilarious!

And from your earlier comment, "There's something about this pairing I can't deny", heh, i hope you'll put out more byaren stories until you find out what that 'something' is!! =)

[jazz_trousers]

Awww that's so nice of you ^^ I'm happy you enjoyed it.
Write more ByaRen? Hm... Don't wanna get thrown out of Team RenIchi lol but I think I probably will write more. They are just too much fun.