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May 31, 2006 00:21

Title: What The Captain Doesn’t Know Won’t Hurt Him

Prompt #3: Mother

Author: squish

Pairing: Jayne/Kaylee

Rating: G

Word Count: 795

Note: Joint project by myself and

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series, author: xx_squish_xx, 2006

Comments 11

mar_sin_nua May 31 2006, 06:25:30 UTC

This is wicked sweet :) Kinda sad, but in a nice way - if that makes any sense?

I look forward to seeing where Misty ran off to

mar_sin_nua May 31 2006, 06:25:58 UTC

bookaddict43 even :p

bookaddict43 May 31 2006, 06:46:28 UTC

I love Jayne's anxiety and the fact he doesn't want the girls to notice it! Kaylee getting him to talk a bit with her was great too!

Now I have to get thinking....'cause prompt #4 is a hard one!

xx_squish_xx May 31 2006, 07:09:16 UTC

Yes #4 is crazy! Maybe it would be a good place for more of the crew to come in?

bookaddict43 May 31 2006, 13:27:44 UTC

Which Misty? Misty from home or Misty right there? I might have to change some wording depending on which!

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xx_squish_xx May 31 2006, 23:54:30 UTC

Glad you liked this one! It's going to be so interesting to see where this ends up!

maureen May 31 2006, 13:00:49 UTC

I think it would be hysterical if Mal was allergic to cats... and can't figure out why he's sneezing so much lately.

(My allergies are bothering me today.)

xx_squish_xx May 31 2006, 23:55:34 UTC

Oh there's a plot bunny that would be hi-larious! Hmmm...

rinalin May 31 2006, 14:00:15 UTC

HEEE!!!!

Oh lord, they are CUTE!

xx_squish_xx May 31 2006, 23:59:12 UTC

It's been kind of fun to write a cute one! And I'm so glad everyone has liked the idea of the kitty on board!