I love the general build-up of the story and the scene with the thieves was sheer brilliance. Pon farr fics can be tricky to write, but you did a great job. Wonderful fic. :-)
*smiles hugely* Thanks so much for your kind words! I must admit, I've put off writing a pon farr fic for awhile because I wasn't quite sure how I could approach one uniquely, adding my own stamp on it, so your feedback is balm to my soul. I'm very excited that the story was so enjoyed. :-)
Hehe, the scene with the thieves was hilarious. I loved their (illogical and ill-timed) confrontation and Uhura taking matters into her hands. :D It's also quite interesting how you made it so that Jim gets pon farr symptoms, too, and goes to Spock to get this cleared up... interesting take. The pon farr sex was hot, too. *cough*
Thanks! I'm utterly thrilled that you enjoyed it. I really had fun writing the scene with the thieves. I was picturing the scenario in my head while writing it and laughing, just getting really into it, so it's totally awesome that you enjoyed that scene particularly. And I'll let sundara know that you enjoyed her fantastic sex scene; she did do an amazing job with it.
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This was awesome.
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Thanks again for the wonderful feedback!
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