w00t postage

[jayden_scott]

I finally got around to twiddling with this first part enough to post it. We'll see how it goes. Let me know what you think...

Keep in mind this is a very, very rough draft. I haven't proofread or edited it. So... yeah...

Click me, bitch!

Comments

[badtyler]

This? Is fucking awesome-- and I don't impress easily.
Doesn't even need much editing. I wish this was what I have to go back and finish now!
I really need to go back to work, dammit. What was supposed to be a half hour break turned into more than 2 hours. Fuck.

No kidding. This is good stuff here.

[jayden_scott]

Wow. That's enough to make a girl blush.

That's a real compliment coming from you, I'm glad you like it.

I'm glad it's not quite on the level of grammatical hazmat.

Eh, a two hour break is good for you! Give your brain a break!

[badtyler]

Oh, honey... no Grammar HazMat here. Just the normal stuff you type when you're overtired.
;)

Fuck. I'd BUY this. Finish it!

back to boring but pays money...

[jayden_scott]

Haha, I'm actually working on it now.

I wouldn't mind boring if it paid. I think I'm going to become a female escort that caters exclusively to a female clientele.

[uselessmarks]

Hey, you can't stop now... I'm all intrigued!

[jayden_scott]

I'm working on the second chapter... which I might post tonight if I get around to working out the kinks.

[mammothluv]

Woah! I had this bookmarked and just got around to starting. I already dig Beth and Tristan. Plus, futuristic and a mystery! I am so sucked in. I picture Beth wearing lesbian sex pants o' doom just so you know. I'm excited to get caught up on the rest of this!

[jayden_scott]

Beth would totally wear lesbian sex pants of doom... only like... times 2. It would be like... lesbian sex cargo pants of doom...

But I am totally glad you dig. It means a lot coming from you because you are teh awesome.