Pienso lo mismo, Massu y Ryo son los que menos feeling tienen entre ellos, creo que el único factor en común es Tegoshi O:
Me gustó el ritmo de la historia, Massu equivocandose a propósito para molestar a Koyama! XD y cuando narras las partes de cómo llegar a la torre son geniales, muy buen detalle (y)!
Que estuviera desde el POV de Ryo me ha gustado harto, y Massu con vértigo fue priceless XDD Me gustó también que no hicieras extra mega hiper hincapié en Massu=>comida cuando estaban comiendo, asi se mantuvo la atmosfera de conversación/reflexión/seriedad con Ryo :D
Y referencia a Tegomass!shopping buddies es siempre indispensable ^O^
Holas! Como siempre es muy agradable verte por aquí :D
Que estuviera del POV de Ryo no era muy opcional. Escribir desde el POV de Massu es demasiado difícil XD y creo que el camino a la torre fue lo más fácil de escribir, porque lo difícil para mi fue hacerlos conversar!
No me gusta hacer tanto incapié en la comida cuando no viene el caso. A Massu le gusta comer, claro, pero no lo voy a hacer comer algo pesado, ni mostrarlo con apetito, si momentos antes estuvo a punto de vomitar!
Pobrecito, por lo del vértigo, pero no puedo evitar imaginarme que algo como eso puede pasarle. En conciertos lo vez saltando feliz de la vida, encaramándose en los carros que usan, y después lo escuchas comentando "estaba sudando como si llevara tres canciones encima cuando recién partimos" porque no le gustan las alturas XD
Well, thank you so much for reading it! I'm really glad you found it cute, I don't know if that's what I was aiming for, but is nice that other people see it like that!
That's what I say! I love them both, I would love for them to get along better, though it's kind of amusing how Ryo complains all the time about the same things with Massu, and Massu never listen to him (thankfully, I like his hair as it is!)
you make my fangirl heart go doki doki xDungaladSeptember 29 2008, 03:10:14 UTC
I really like this one so very, very much. *___* Let me list the reasons:
a) Because they SO sound like themselves. b) Because they're SO IC. c) Because Massu says things to make KoyaMAMI worry like the mother hen he is. XDDDD And drag Shige. OMG. ♥ d) Because it's SO true that they don't seem to be... close? It feels like they have nothing in common. Then again, they're in the same unit, there's gotta be something! And suddenly "HELLO THERE, JAVI'S FIC :D" (aka "Because this needed to be done~") e) Because OMG TOKYO TOWER.
So yeah, this fic is so much love~! ♥ It'd be nice to read another fic which refers to this one, but whether you write a sequel/pseudo-sequel or not, this fic is pretty good on its own. ^^
Re: you make my fangirl heart go doki doki xDjavieraSeptember 29 2008, 03:47:16 UTC
I don't know what I'd do without you! I wouldn't have someone to fangirl about seriously about topics that shouldn't be so serious!
As we talked about, this ended up needing some extra work, that hopefully I'll come around and finish. I do like the *potential* relationship Massu and Ryo could have if they could hang out more often or understanding each other, at least. And I feel I can write something like that now, *because* I wrote this first. Makes sense?
And Massu messing with Koyama's head (and Shige's) is just something I had to do! He does go out with Tego a lot!!
Re: you make my fangirl heart go doki doki xDjavieraSeptember 29 2008, 11:06:10 UTC
Um, not so much a sequel as potentially use this fic as reference to another one. I like Ryo and Massu a lot, but to write about them without making them a little closer is really hard, so writing this helps being able to write something else in the future ^^U That's how it is for me, at least.
oo~~ i really liked this fic, you built on your own opinion of the news members and developed it so well. It was great to read and left a nice aftertaste. Keep it up!~
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Me gustó el ritmo de la historia, Massu equivocandose a propósito para molestar a Koyama! XD y cuando narras las partes de cómo llegar a la torre son geniales, muy buen detalle (y)!
Que estuviera desde el POV de Ryo me ha gustado harto, y Massu con vértigo fue priceless XDD Me gustó también que no hicieras extra mega hiper hincapié en Massu=>comida cuando estaban comiendo, asi se mantuvo la atmosfera de conversación/reflexión/seriedad con Ryo :D
Y referencia a Tegomass!shopping buddies es siempre indispensable ^O^
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Que estuviera del POV de Ryo no era muy opcional. Escribir desde el POV de Massu es demasiado difícil XD y creo que el camino a la torre fue lo más fácil de escribir, porque lo difícil para mi fue hacerlos conversar!
No me gusta hacer tanto incapié en la comida cuando no viene el caso. A Massu le gusta comer, claro, pero no lo voy a hacer comer algo pesado, ni mostrarlo con apetito, si momentos antes estuvo a punto de vomitar!
Pobrecito, por lo del vértigo, pero no puedo evitar imaginarme que algo como eso puede pasarle. En conciertos lo vez saltando feliz de la vida, encaramándose en los carros que usan, y después lo escuchas comentando "estaba sudando como si llevara tres canciones encima cuando recién partimos" porque no le gustan las alturas XD
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Thankyou for sharing!! <3
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*love you icon, btw!
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CUTEEEE
Oh why thankyou, Daiki fan also?
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I love him and ryotan.
Ryotan is a toughtfull person is he.
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a) Because they SO sound like themselves.
b) Because they're SO IC.
c) Because Massu says things to make KoyaMAMI worry like the mother hen he is. XDDDD And drag Shige. OMG. ♥
d) Because it's SO true that they don't seem to be... close? It feels like they have nothing in common. Then again, they're in the same unit, there's gotta be something! And suddenly "HELLO THERE, JAVI'S FIC :D" (aka "Because this needed to be done~")
e) Because OMG TOKYO TOWER.
So yeah, this fic is so much love~! ♥ It'd be nice to read another fic which refers to this one, but whether you write a sequel/pseudo-sequel or not, this fic is pretty good on its own. ^^
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As we talked about, this ended up needing some extra work, that hopefully I'll come around and finish. I do like the *potential* relationship Massu and Ryo could have if they could hang out more often or understanding each other, at least. And I feel I can write something like that now, *because* I wrote this first. Makes sense?
And Massu messing with Koyama's head (and Shige's) is just something I had to do! He does go out with Tego a lot!!
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sequel.....???????????
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*btw, you icon is LOVE!
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and thank you! i like your icon too =D
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