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tabaqui January 18 2008, 14:12:57 UTC
Dean grabs the hand Sam puts on his hip and drags him closer, pulls the covers up over their heads like they’re kids again, safe inside a fort of blankets and pillows, like the headaches and the nightmares, the demon and his destiny, they can all be kept out by Dean and a couple of threadbare sheets. For a little while, Sam wants to pretend it’s that easy.

Awww. That's so good, but so hurty, too. I loved the slow build, and the 'case' was good, too. The 'Devil' in the water, basically acting like a big wading bird was almost sad. It's just doing its thing for years and years, that little pool its only real 'place'...

But of course, evol.
:)
Good stuff!

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javajunkie13 January 27 2008, 23:42:50 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

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lilieblues January 18 2008, 17:06:07 UTC
This was really fantastic...I loved the image of Dean pulling the covers over their heads. I thought it was really lovely. Thanks for sharing...Now, I'm gonna check out your other fics!

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javajunkie13 January 27 2008, 23:44:35 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad it worked for you.

Now, I'm gonna check out your other fics

Thanks! I hope you enjoyed them. :)

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innie_darling January 18 2008, 18:39:58 UTC
This is so wonderful! I've been waiting for a really awesome Jersey Devil story, and the fact that you pulled that off along with the push-pull of their shifting relationship is remarkable. Thanks for a great read!

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javajunkie13 January 27 2008, 23:47:04 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and that all the aspects of it worked for you. :)

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batgurl10 January 18 2008, 20:14:09 UTC
This was a wonderful Awesome story. Very low key. You got the boys down PAT*
The voices, the feelings and thoughts..like watching an episode (on HBO) lol. I really enjoyed it--thanks for posting!
this is probably crappy fb for such a well written story.

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javajunkie13 January 27 2008, 23:49:25 UTC
Thank you! I'm so pleased the boys worked for you (really, who wouldn't want to watch the HBO version? *g*) Thanks for the comment. :)

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apieceofcake January 18 2008, 23:55:15 UTC
Nicely done :-)

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javajunkie13 January 27 2008, 23:49:35 UTC
Thank you!

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