Topic 36B (B): Hold Your Tongue

[java_fiend]

And here we are, still in the middle of Hell Week... it sure is living up to its name!

Here is the second of my five entries for the week. As always, may the Idol gods be kind and generous...

Comments

[basric]

Another terrifying tale. Loved it.

[myrna_bird]

Oh Noooooooo!

[alycewilson]

Definitely not a scene you want to stumble upon in the middle of nowhere. Creepy!

[whipchick]

Nice sense of urgency, and the way you shift back and forth in time is very effective!

Spotted a typo -
"out of hear.” - and you have a couple of tense shifts in the opening, if you go back to this piece - I know you're working on publication these days!