Hollow Man

[jaune_chat]

Title: Hollow Man
Author: jaune_chat
Fandom: Heroes
Characters/Pairing: Peter Petrelli, the Haitian, Arthur Petrelli, Maury Parkman, Peter/OMCs
Rating: NC-17 for sex
Word Count: 4,634
Spoilers: Through the end of S3
Warnings: Slash, memory loss, underaged sex, toys, D/s, spanking, dubcon/noncon
Disclaimer: Heroes is owned by Tim Kring, NBC, et al.

Comments

[anansie_s]

Oh, that is so sad. Poor Peter. The explanation for how his predelictions developed is convincing. I love the special little connection that the Haitian and Peter have developed.

[jaune_chat]

Poor poor Peter. brighteyed_jill likes to see Peter in a tormented and humiliated state, so that's what I was trying to supply. I'm just the dealer. ;)

Glad you liked it (and Peter's predelictions), and thanks for commenting!

[brighteyed_jill]

Oh Peter! *pets him* This was a delicious and creative look at how dear little Peter got to be such a needy little slut. And a new take on abusive Arthur! Yay!

I think this is my favorite part: “Peter, there never was a Sonya. She never existed. Sonya was the form Maury had the agents wear when they came to your room.”

The bottom dropped out of Peter's stomach, and he felt a roaring in his ears.

Just cuz the idea is so creepy, and how can Peter be sure of anything after that?

I also liked the scene where Peter is aware of what's going on when they bring him to the Company, and his father is there being all harsh and efficient. Brr.

Great exploration of how Peter came to be this way. But we love him for it! Thank you, favored minion!

[jaune_chat]

'Tis fun to bring the Peter angst. Particularly the Daddy angst. You just know Peter has had it so hard, considering what a callus asshole Arthur is to him on the show, and this is totally one way it could have happened.

Glad you liked my twisted version of Peter's sexual history, Ms. CEO!

[jaune_chat]

Glad you liked the Haitian! I haven't had much occasion to write him, so I'm glad it worked for you.

Hmm, I am very mean to Peter in this fic. And I like it like that. ;)

Thanks for commenting!