New Kind of Normal

Feb 16, 2009 09:42

Title: New Kind of Normal
Author: jaune_chat
Pairing: Matt/Daphne
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Specifically through 3x14, “A Clear and Present Danger”
Genre: Romance
Word Count: 3,158
Author’s Note: I thought the Matt/Daphne relationship deserved a lot better than it was written, so I wrote it better! This is an alternate take on the scene ( Read more... )

het, matt parkman, daphne millbrook, heroes

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jaune_chat February 20 2009, 12:20:28 UTC
I know their relationship on the show was kinda given short shrift, and I so wanted to see the relationship we glimpsed in Matt's future visions. Because the show version was giving me this vaguely creepy father/daughter, older brother/younger sister vibe. But in some scenes they were so sweet...

I'm very glad you liked the dialogue. And hey, concentual het sex in the confines of a loving, monogamous relationship? What madness is this? I haven't done that since the M-rated cut scene for my Sky High epic.

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havemy_heart February 21 2009, 04:27:49 UTC
I think I envy Daphne! To be with a man who can read your thoughts and know exactly what you want? Heaven! This is hot and also very sweet. I love it :)

I also need a Matt/Daphne icon.

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jaune_chat February 24 2009, 11:44:19 UTC
Thanks for reviewing! Yeah, the idea of a guy knowing what you want without having to constantly give instructions... totally hot. And speedsex! Can't forget the speedsex!

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ashesfor_trees March 20 2009, 14:31:43 UTC
It felt like a brick wall had suddenly crumbled down between them, like they were suddenly living with their skin off.
I really liked that line--really cool imagry!

(and the smut was great, haha. I love psychic!sex :p)

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jaune_chat March 20 2009, 20:44:06 UTC
I'm so very glad you enjoyed it!

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kathrynthegr8 June 21 2009, 13:33:10 UTC
Oh this was lovely! I liked how you redefined "normal" for these two. Matt was so sweet in this, all the little details about not holding her hands too tight and being willing to let her go. I liked how he finally gets to use his power and not have it back-fire on him. This makes me miss Daphne so much and how great their relationship could have been!

Well done.

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jaune_chat June 21 2009, 15:12:27 UTC
I'm really glad you liked it! I was kind of waiting for the characters to get their acts together for so much of this season that finally fanfic had to fill the gaps. If Matt had taken the time to think, I am of the belief this could have happened.

Thank you for commenting!

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anonymous December 6 2010, 06:19:49 UTC
Very good fic. Just one comment: Daphne's has small breasts? Have you seen Brea Grant? ;)

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jaune_chat December 6 2010, 12:57:43 UTC
Glad you liked the story! And yeah, heh, now that I think about it, not so small. But I think when I was writing this I had "runner" stuck in my mind, and most runners are less generously endowed than Brea. ;)

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