Comments | jasmasson: Fic: Growing Pains, Troyslash, Hector/Paris, 1/2, PG13

jasmasson

Fic: Growing Pains, Troyslash, Hector/Paris, 1/2, PG13

Jan 23, 2005 23:34

Author: Jas Masson ( Read more... )

troy, fic: troy, hector/paris, slash, fic, growing pains

Comments 24

stewardess January 23 2005, 16:46:00 UTC

That was enjoyable. I don't think I would call this an AU, but movie-verse. I like the reference to the stolen horse moment, particulary the lead-in:

Do you love me brother? I found this kitten.
Do you love me brother? I've torn my robe.

That was perfect.

jasmasson January 24 2005, 11:05:49 UTC

Thanks stewardess, I'm particularly glad you enjoyed it as I am such a fan of yours!

It's not quite AU yet, you're right, but it will be next chapter, I think, so I thought I'd better put in the warning.

Thanks so much for taking the time to comment
J

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jasmasson January 24 2005, 11:08:10 UTC

You can't say Paris is particularly nice... but he can be adorable ;-)

Hector will be succumbing soon... his willpower is hanging by the thread!

Thanks for the comment!

bellatrixamici January 23 2005, 18:29:36 UTC

"That little *bitch* was kissing my girlfriend."

Yes, a little bitch indeed.
I like this Paris, he's a brat but there's reason behind his actions, or so it seems.
Thanks!

jasmasson January 24 2005, 11:09:51 UTC

Thanks! I love Paris, and think abandonment (or even potential abandonment) has to give a boy some issues... or perhaps I'm just looking for excuses because he's soo pretty ;-)

peaches_74 January 23 2005, 19:16:11 UTC

Poor Hector never stood a chance against Paris, even from the crib. I like how you've given depth to Paris' selfishness, but still have him to show his vulnerability and insecurity only to Hector. The incident with Mestor nicely foreshadows Hector's decision to let Paris bring Helen to Troy. I'm eager to read the second part to this story.

jasmasson January 24 2005, 11:11:16 UTC

No, I think Hector was doomed from the start! But Paris is culnerable to him to. I'm glad you enjoyed it, J

montmorency January 23 2005, 19:35:32 UTC

I love this selfish yet irresistable Paris and endlessly protective Hector. The interaction between them is delightful.

"I was cold, Hector," he whispered softly. "And all alone."

Hector's anger disintegrated entirely with no further token resistance. He realised how cold the flesh under his hands was, and how desperately Paris's small slender fingers grasped his own muscled arms.

Hector groaned and enveloped his brother in his arms. Paris clung to him tightly, wrapping his legs around Hector's waist and sobbing quietly into his shoulder.

"Hush now," he murmured soothingly, rubbing Paris's back and kissing his soft curls. "It's alright. I'm here."

"Knew you would," Paris whispered, between sobs, "I knew you'd come."

That just broke my heart. In a good way. Waiting for part 2....

jasmasson January 24 2005, 11:13:01 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad YOU enjoyed it, as you are almost single-handedly responsible for keeping H/P alive for me! Hector is so protective... I look forward to stretching him to his limits ;-)

montmorency January 24 2005, 11:29:32 UTC

Trust me, I really enjoyed it. Something about protectiveness just gets to me. And sweet sassy little brothers. And I'm thrilled with the apparent renaissance of H/P that is happening around here.