Comments | jasmasson: Fic: Cold, Supernatural, Sam and Dean, PreSlash, PG13

jasmasson

Fic: Cold, Supernatural, Sam and Dean, PreSlash, PG13

Aug 20, 2007 22:03

Title: Cold
Author: jasmasson
Genre: Supernatural, PreSlash, Teen!chesters
Pairings/Characters: Sam and Dean
Rating: PG13
Archive: Now also at AO3
Word count: 5,500
Disclaimer: Not mine, no money, not true, blah blah...
Beta: Thanks to the beautiful candygramme who is, quite frankly, made of win.
( Summary: Dean had no resistance at all to a Sammy watching him expectantly with those puppy dog eyes; just waiting for his big brother Dean to give him what he wanted. Still, luckily for Dean, Sam was fifteen and therefore a whiny bitch most of the time, which Dean had a much higher resistance to. )

fic: supernatural, fic: supernatural (fictional person fic), sam/dean, slash, sam and dean gen, supernatural, fic

Comments 88

montmorency August 21 2007, 01:44:18 UTC

I love this. I LOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS! So funny and the character voices are so spot-on. Dean telling Sammy he's not letting him out of the house ever again. The girls writing Mrs. ____ Winchester in their notebooks. Just everything.

Know what this reminds me of? A certain fic you once wrote about a big brother taking care of his bratty little brother, a couple of millenia ago. :)

jasmasson August 21 2007, 05:18:45 UTC

I pretty much think Dean would chain Sam to the house *cough*bed*cough* to keep him safe if he could!

Ah, the good old days *g* Protective Big Brothers are love ;-)

montmorency August 21 2007, 10:35:48 UTC

There's an image, Sammy chained to the house (maybe out in the yard) looking like a sad overgrown puppy.

Just remembered The School of John Winchester beat the Boy Scouts any day. *snorfle* This is full of little touches like that.

jasmasson August 21 2007, 10:41:21 UTC

Hee! GOD, I wish I was an artist, I so would LOVE to see some art of that! Hair in his big puppy eyes, looking all sad, maybe Dean trying to tempt him with a ball! LOL!

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jasmasson August 21 2007, 05:20:32 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed. Re Pre-Slash, I think their feelings would just grow, rather than come on suddenly, and it's likely Dean's would be further along when they were young because he's older *pets Dean*.

avid_slacker August 21 2007, 04:42:10 UTC

I always love stories that focus on Dean's almost obsessive devotion to Sam and his well-being. It might not be healthy, but it's so damn sweet.

jasmasson August 21 2007, 05:21:23 UTC

Pah, who need healthy?! Especially when you can have sweetly obsessive ;-)

calijirl5150 August 21 2007, 06:38:44 UTC

That was bloodly brilliant !!. You captured Dean & Sammy perfectly. Great job!

jasmasson August 21 2007, 10:42:03 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you thought so!

sauvageonne August 21 2007, 11:22:14 UTC

I really liked it. Impressive !!!

jasmasson August 21 2007, 12:05:48 UTC

Thanks!