woo-eee...I'm not much for spanking, but I do love the way you write these boys...and I wasn't disappointed. Love that Hector (or Eric) had to see Paris/Orlando and flipped them over...
I'm writing a 3some with Beanie, and discovered he was actually doing them both at the same time. Now, the man's talented, no question, but I think that was a bit much even for him ;-)
How could you even consider trashing this! It is so hot I nearly combusted while reading it!!!!! As for "no humour," surely you jest, my friend? O_O
The escalating argument is wonderful, Paris is so defiant and cute and even, in some ways, right. But Hector has to take charge, that's his way. And even though you start by informing us that it's role-play, I was so wrapped up in the Hector/Paris scene that I'd forgotten by the time Orlando and Eric showed up.
And yes, the snuggling at the end is adorable and I love it muchly.
Plus I love all the different descriptions of Paris' adorable little derriere.
And, you know how obsessed I am with Paris's bum... because you saw it before I made myself cut a lot of it! But I just can't help it! I've totally got an Orli!bum fetish... And if I've got it, so has my Eric ;-)
As for "no humour," surely you jest, my friend? O_O
Well, actually I wrote that disclaimer before the ending so maybe I should edit. Still. No one minds a little joke at Eric's expense, I'm sure ;-) Especially after Hector was kind of a macho bully, bless him. He's all tied up in his duty. Thank goodness Paris is there to mess him up *eg*.
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“You know, there’s definitely an Oscar in your future,” Eric said after a moment. “Those tears were fantastic.”
“They were real. You hit like a train, you bastard.”
“Really?” Eric looked alarmed. “Shit, I’m sorry! You should have *said* something.”
“Nah, not really,” Orlando grinned. “Got you though, so you’re right, I definitely should win an Oscar!”
I loved the whole thing. That was so good.
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Loved their pillow talk after most of all!
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Got a bit confusing, huh? (Caught myself calling them the wrong names twice while writing. Doh!)
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i imagine its like writing a 3some...I always end up with and extra arm, leg or ass in there somewhere...lmao
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I'm writing a 3some with Beanie, and discovered he was actually doing them both at the same time. Now, the man's talented, no question, but I think that was a bit much even for him ;-)
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“But he’s so in love with Paris,” Eric said sadly.
Orlando caught the slight undertone to Eric’s words.
“And what, you think Paris lets just anybody tie him up, spank him and shag him senseless? I think not.”
“Hmm.” Eric allowed Orlando to pull him closer.
Uh oh, is Eric revealing something here, eh?
Good show, luv :)
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Nah, me neither... but willing to try if he was ;-)
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It's always fun when Orlando & Eric role play! heh
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The escalating argument is wonderful, Paris is so defiant and cute and even, in some ways, right. But Hector has to take charge, that's his way. And even though you start by informing us that it's role-play, I was so wrapped up in the Hector/Paris scene that I'd forgotten by the time Orlando and Eric showed up.
And yes, the snuggling at the end is adorable and I love it muchly.
Plus I love all the different descriptions of Paris' adorable little derriere.
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And, you know how obsessed I am with Paris's bum... because you saw it before I made myself cut a lot of it! But I just can't help it! I've totally got an Orli!bum fetish... And if I've got it, so has my Eric ;-)
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Thank gawd you didn't cut it ALL. Phew
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Well, actually I wrote that disclaimer before the ending so maybe I should edit. Still. No one minds a little joke at Eric's expense, I'm sure ;-) Especially after Hector was kind of a macho bully, bless him. He's all tied up in his duty. Thank goodness Paris is there to mess him up *eg*.
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