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jack4will July 4 2005, 13:51:47 UTC
*snickers at the last part there*

“You know, there’s definitely an Oscar in your future,” Eric said after a moment. “Those tears were fantastic.”

“They were real. You hit like a train, you bastard.”

“Really?” Eric looked alarmed. “Shit, I’m sorry! You should have *said* something.”

“Nah, not really,” Orlando grinned. “Got you though, so you’re right, I definitely should win an Oscar!”

I loved the whole thing. That was so good.

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jasmasson July 4 2005, 15:02:52 UTC
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed. Orli can't resist teasing Eric, poor lamb *g*.

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jack4will July 4 2005, 15:40:04 UTC
Thats for sure but you do know that Eric will get his Orli back for that sometime.

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bloominbabylon July 4 2005, 14:06:54 UTC
woo-eee...I'm not much for spanking, but I do love the way you write these boys...and I wasn't disappointed. Love that Hector (or Eric) had to see Paris/Orlando and flipped them over...

Loved their pillow talk after most of all!

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jasmasson July 4 2005, 15:04:18 UTC
Thanks. Glad you gave it a try even though it's not your cup o' T.

Got a bit confusing, huh? (Caught myself calling them the wrong names twice while writing. Doh!)

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bloominbabylon July 4 2005, 15:26:18 UTC
well..variety is the spice of life :-)

i imagine its like writing a 3some...I always end up with and extra arm, leg or ass in there somewhere...lmao

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jasmasson July 4 2005, 15:37:20 UTC
LOL! I know!

I'm writing a 3some with Beanie, and discovered he was actually doing them both at the same time. Now, the man's talented, no question, but I think that was a bit much even for him ;-)

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wynterhawk July 4 2005, 14:10:13 UTC
*laughing* cripes, I don't know if I could withstand being spanked by Eric. *grins at the thought*

“But he’s so in love with Paris,” Eric said sadly.

Orlando caught the slight undertone to Eric’s words.

“And what, you think Paris lets just anybody tie him up, spank him and shag him senseless? I think not.”

“Hmm.” Eric allowed Orlando to pull him closer.

Uh oh, is Eric revealing something here, eh?

Good show, luv :)

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jasmasson July 4 2005, 15:05:10 UTC
*laughing* cripes, I don't know if I could withstand being spanked by Eric. *grins at the thought*

Nah, me neither... but willing to try if he was ;-)

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wynterhawk July 4 2005, 15:06:57 UTC
He can spank you, eh? But he'd definitely better have something to make it up to you afterwards. *giggles*

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jasmasson July 4 2005, 15:11:38 UTC
Well, he'd definitely have to kiss it better *snigger*.

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galor5 July 4 2005, 14:18:34 UTC
I Loved it!!

It's always fun when Orlando & Eric role play! heh

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jasmasson July 4 2005, 15:06:15 UTC
Thanks! Bless them, they know how to have fun... now if only I were there with them ;-)

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montmorency July 4 2005, 14:23:04 UTC
How could you even consider trashing this! It is so hot I nearly combusted while reading it!!!!! As for "no humour," surely you jest, my friend? O_O

The escalating argument is wonderful, Paris is so defiant and cute and even, in some ways, right. But Hector has to take charge, that's his way. And even though you start by informing us that it's role-play, I was so wrapped up in the Hector/Paris scene that I'd forgotten by the time Orlando and Eric showed up.

And yes, the snuggling at the end is adorable and I love it muchly.

Plus I love all the different descriptions of Paris' adorable little derriere.

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jasmasson July 4 2005, 15:08:44 UTC
They are cute aren't they.

And, you know how obsessed I am with Paris's bum... because you saw it before I made myself cut a lot of it! But I just can't help it! I've totally got an Orli!bum fetish... And if I've got it, so has my Eric ;-)

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montmorency July 4 2005, 15:14:29 UTC
You shouldn't have cut the Orli bum stuff! I was teasing, I loved it!

Thank gawd you didn't cut it ALL. Phew

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jasmasson July 4 2005, 15:15:17 UTC
As for "no humour," surely you jest, my friend? O_O

Well, actually I wrote that disclaimer before the ending so maybe I should edit. Still. No one minds a little joke at Eric's expense, I'm sure ;-) Especially after Hector was kind of a macho bully, bless him. He's all tied up in his duty. Thank goodness Paris is there to mess him up *eg*.

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