Comments | jareth_gk: This isn't real...

jareth_gk

This isn't real...

Jan 25, 2006 21:06

( This isn't real... )

january, 2006, stories, 25, day: wednesday, january 25

Comments 6

gumbyavatar January 26 2006, 07:43:00 UTC

Hmm. *reads* Props for you! Continue it.

jareth_gk January 27 2006, 02:00:53 UTC

Really? When I re-read it I thought it lacked cohesion in some places. I was trying to play with a few idea simultaneously, and it may need some work. I will write some more. I think my work is coming out a bit more like a Pulp Fiction or some other Tarentino work then I expected. Still... it is interesting and entertaining. So there will sure to be more in time.

x Jeremy M.

gumbyavatar January 27 2006, 05:39:25 UTC

Well as I am probably the most forgetful person in THEM, I'm probably not a good judge of cohesion. I mostly liked it because, of the intermittent sci-fi I've read, this was pretty good and yet didn't remind me of anything else I've already read. That's hard to do.

jareth_gk January 27 2006, 08:16:35 UTC

Nifty. Then maybe it would be an idea to build on for me. :)

Jeremy M.

*blink blink* jabberw0ckygirl January 27 2006, 12:48:05 UTC

Wow...I like it. Much happiness to you for coming up with something like that...

I need to work on the jumbled idea in my head now. Thanks for the creativity boost.

Re: *blink blink* jareth_gk January 28 2006, 01:37:56 UTC

I hope it allows you to find your inspiration where you least expect it. :)

x Jeremy M.