Fic: Bully for you (NC17) Puck/Rachel (Glee)

[jaq_of_spades]

Title: Bully for you
Author: JaqofSpades
Fandom: Glee
Characters/Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: 1619

Summary: “Puck, of the slushies, and the insults, and the harem of Cheerios, has her pushed up against the lockers, both hands set above her head, her world shrinking to his ridiculous haircut and his massive biceps and his hard, hard body

Comments

From arichey

[anonymous]

This is ... oddly sweet. And super-hot, of course. Can't forget about the hot. But seriously. Somehow, even in the middle of all the awesome smut (because again, I can't stress the awesomeness enough), there's just this great essence of Puck/Rachel that I can't help but smile at. Really great take on the prompt.

Re: From arichey

[jaq_of_spades]

Thank you! I think the hottest stuff is always the scenarios that work the characters, that have some truth to them, and sweetness and angst is always in the mix with these two, I think.

[vikingprincess]

Wow, I really thought it was in high school, there, until the end. And it was INCREDIBLY hot, despite the dub-con impression I first had. (Then again, when it's fiction or fantasy, I like that sort of thing.)

[jaq_of_spades]

That's exactly what I was going for, so I'm glad I pulled it off. Usually I'd warn a little bit harder for dubcon (not that I write it much) but in this case, I didn't want to give away the ending, because though in the scenario, it was, it really wasn't. And yes, I thought I'd used that little fact against us all - most women like dubcon in fantasy, but not reality, and poor conflicted Rachel ... she so would :D

[vikingprincess]

It definitely gave her a chance to unwind those seemingly-perpetually knotted panties, didn't it? :)

Are you watching (does your area broadcast) The Glee Project, now that Glee is done until the fall?

[orangetulips25]

Oh my....this was hot. And, I agree, sweet. The tears on Puck's face, at the end? My heart, in a million pieces.

I really thought they were in school, too. I didn't read the prompt for this one beforehand. You did a great job, and I enjoy the full circle exorcism of bully!Puck.

Your smut is deeeelicious! I just started reading your smuckleberry week stuff, and I am FLOORED. Amazing job!! It's classy, hot, sensual, and HOT (did I say that twice? Hmm, excuse me, I might need a fan, it's a little hot in here...)

[yloet]

I've said it before and I'll say it again: PLEASE KEEP ON WRITING IN THIS 'VERSE. It's so awesome, how you write these two. I just love it. So HOT. So amazing. More!!!