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jaq_of_spades

FIC: Tooth and Claw (3/4) NC-17

Jan 19, 2008 10:30

Title: Tooth and Claw (3/4)
Rating: NC-17 (sexuality)
Author: JaqofSpades

PART THREE

Sometimes Marie forgot that knowledge and experience were different things. Logan’s memory, Jean’s memory, Pyro, Bobby, a random trucker, a clumsy waitress … the line stretched right back to poor Cody Robbins, and several of those people had received blow jobs.

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wolverinerogue, fic, fanfic, tooth and claw

Comments 11

bima140277 January 19 2008, 00:35:18 UTC

Awwww no Logan you'd make wonderfull babies with Marie.

jaq_of_spades January 21 2008, 23:28:53 UTC

Absolutely! Not sure if he'll come around in just a few short chapters, though :(

vikingprincess January 19 2008, 01:38:59 UTC

fantastic. hot and emotional and just all around great!

sweety167 January 21 2008, 07:09:51 UTC

Wow. That was heavy, but in such a wonderful way. Very intimate.

jaq_of_spades January 21 2008, 23:30:23 UTC

Thank you! Hot is pretty much a given with this pairing, but I do like to bring through a more human side too.

jaq_of_spades January 21 2008, 23:35:53 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it! Suspect there will be plenty of emotion in the next chapter too ...

heartandcore January 19 2008, 12:19:19 UTC

How lovely it is to have Logan and Marie at the very rocky start of their relationship. Time of discoveries and making way through what marks them as the individual they are. Am not one to say no to beautiful smut, but a great favorite is to watch these two together growing pains and learning just how much they love one another.

Good delivery of images and emotions. Congrats on a well told story.

jaq_of_spades January 21 2008, 23:31:34 UTC

Thanks, Valeria. It's good to have the story aspects of the story appeciated!

september_chic January 20 2008, 10:40:40 UTC

Oh bittersweet! I've just caught up on the 2nd & 3rd chapter... and may I say how glad I am that there's a 4th - I thought the 3rd chapter was the end for a moment - I was just about to wail lots!

I love the little things that make this so life like. Her trail of thoughts. The honesty. Her reaction to the blowjob, his reaction to the missing condom, his quiet voice in the darkness. It really brought the story to life for me. Nothing's ever easy or simple, and I love that you don't pretend that it is.

...although - and I have to say it 'cause it made me laugh! - for some reason when the images of the little Wolverines came dancing through her thoughts, the ones in my head came complete with sideburns. Bit weird that! - Think I need to work on that one!

Really looking forward to the 4th!

jaq_of_spades January 21 2008, 23:33:36 UTC

No Wailing required! I'm hoping I'll be able to wrap it up in the next chapter so I can move on to something new. But I doubt it will be a completely closed book at that point: after all, it'd be the work of a lifetime, taming Wolverines! (Not that we'd want them tame, of course.) Glad you liked!

dutchxfan January 22 2008, 14:24:13 UTC

Oh, no! They make lovely babies! I have a Logan-Sim and a Marie-Sim and they had (yes, had - the game crashed at one point) a beautiful son and daughter. *lol*

As for the fic, I'm glad there's a 4th installement. I love Marie's thoughts about the blowjob. Very realistic.

Poor Logan. I could feel it in my stomach when he told her about being a monster. Marie's got a very tough battle to fight still.