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dreamsofdest1ny in japanxchina

[ CASTLE / fanfiction, chapter 5 / R / smut, darkness ]

Jan 15, 2010 07:13

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A Castle of Silence and Bones

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005.
this is an elixir of power
(if you cannot get what you want, then you do not want it)

( chapter five )

mature!content, fanfiction

Comments 38

Lovely, lovely. xotsukiyume January 15 2010, 21:56:10 UTC

*sighs happily!*

I love the amount of suspense you manage to stuff into under 500 words, it's pretty awesome/intense!

Re: Lovely, lovely. dreamsofdest1ny January 15 2010, 22:05:05 UTC

Yay; thank you so much! I was, again, a bit hesitant about this chapter. Everything is SO going to go downhill from here... *sighs*

Re: Lovely, lovely. xotsukiyume January 15 2010, 22:05:17 UTC

Literally or metaphorically?

Re: Lovely, lovely. xotsukiyume January 15 2010, 22:05:35 UTC

Or actually: in the story or outside of the story?

Thread 8

Speculation xotsukiyume January 15 2010, 22:07:13 UTC

Can I play the game with your fic? I really really really wanna see where it's going, but obviously, it's just not going anywhere fast.

z3z

Re: Speculation dreamsofdest1ny January 15 2010, 22:08:17 UTC

Er... I have no idea how you play?

Re: Speculation xotsukiyume January 15 2010, 22:08:41 UTC

I hypothesize 'A' or 'Z' and you tell me yes/no?

Re: Speculation dreamsofdest1ny January 15 2010, 22:55:41 UTC

Er... okay?

Thread 16

arialyn January 15 2010, 23:04:09 UTC

Another beautiful chapter, as usual. *O*
I agree with xotsukiyume, you manage to put so much emotion and feeling in only a couple of words. :) Great job!

dreamsofdest1ny January 15 2010, 23:06:12 UTC

Aww... thank you so much! ^^

Nice chapter exotification January 15 2010, 23:43:07 UTC

I appreciate the themes, and your last lines, and one-liners in general, are just made of WIN.

Re: Nice chapter dreamsofdest1ny January 15 2010, 23:43:50 UTC

Why thank you, Sam! ^^

I was wondering why you haven't been up and around this community.

Re: Nice chapter exotification January 15 2010, 23:44:35 UTC

*shrugs*
I was sorta-stalking, but didn't feel like posting. But I was also attempting to finish my midterm paper (which was epic!procrastination, by the way).

Re: Nice chapter dreamsofdest1ny January 15 2010, 23:45:06 UTC

Mmm.

Go make a request *demands*.

Thread 7

acquiesceme January 16 2010, 00:12:18 UTC

I was reading through the whole of the mini-discussion/question-and-answering session going on, I thought it was all obvious as well, but I suppose that's just a side effect of collaborating with you on one work?

XD

PS: This was another great chapter--as if you didn't already know that!

dreamsofdest1ny January 16 2010, 00:14:48 UTC

Or maybe they're actually obvious? I mean, I don't think it's a particularly deep story. Just filled with psychological "fun" and random twists and turns. But it's nothing like HAM, right?

...Right???

acquiesceme January 16 2010, 00:15:19 UTC

I reserve the right to remain silent~ 8P