[Vix] Trapped

[myxstorie]

Trapped
R for violence; Ryo-centric
For Crys, for her psycho killer Ryo prompt, originally here.

Comments

[yararanger]

this is your productive studying, huh? ;D /shot

This was AMAZING and I loved your description of the woman, and how Ryo made her fall for him with his limited Korean and then huwah *~* I loved the 'water through ants' analogy, that was a really good emotive visual that I wish I'd thought of myself XD; and I LOVE HOW IT ALL TIES IN WITH THE EVERYTHING XDDDDDDD and then the END Fucking Akanishi YES JIN, you bastard =_=

XDDDDDDDDD oh and also, confession time:

shining like a beacon

I am so, so sorry but the very first time I read that I misread it as 'shining like bacon'. *smothers self* I fell about laughing once I clocked my error XDDDDDD;; AND SOMEHOW IT IS SO VERY APPROPRIATE. :x

ilu ♥

[myxstorie]

shh, I was hoping people wouldn't notice XD

akjsdksds THANK YOU aldlsklflgkgfl;khg I spent such a long time hmming and hahing over the different 'visuals', it was so hard to find different words for things!!

LOOOOL SHINING LIKE BACON HAHAHAHAHA SHINE, BUTA, SHINE!

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[yararanger]

What kind of a friend would I be if I didn't nag you about studying? X)

*sits on* You have nothing at all to worry about, it was gorgeous *o*

Re: bacon: SHINE, BUTA, SHINE, FILL THIS FIC WITH YOUR PORKY GLORY~ /gets shot at least 47 times

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[myxstorie]

♥

CRYING, I want to write crackfic to 'this little piggy went to market' >_<;

this Saku-piggy went to market (someone's gotta look after the rabble)
this Ohno-piggy stayed at home (he was too busy sleeping to help)
this Nino-piggy had roast beef (and laced it with laxatives)
this Matsu-piggy had none (he's watching his figure)
and this Aiba-piggy...

>_>;

[elizajet]

this.was.amazing. *_* From the unexpected crazy Ryo to Akanishi coming out of nowhere (always a bonus), everything just fit perfectly.

I loved the description of her reaction to him, the visuals of his actual attack were really rich and *keysmashes*

And *points above* I read it as shining like bacon too...lol..I've only been up for about 10 minutes XD

Fantastic ♥

[myxstorie]

ooh, hello! :D

Thank you so much! XD Keysmash for me! ♥

XDD That gives a whooole new look to you shine on the world, huh XD

[sanjihan]

I want to laugh. Really. XD But you made something serious out of something hilarious and did it so wonderfully. I love your description and depth. Thank you!

[myxstorie]

I fail so hard at crack, but when Crys says DARE YOU TO WRITE IT, I can't resist XD

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[dw9lives]

this was so good, i love it!!! the details were so awesome, loved it so much!

[myxstorie]

Thank you! :Dv

[beltenebra]

O____O

fantastic.

She doesn't appear to recognise his face, either, although that's never stopped him before. It's almost more exciting when they scream his name.

I actually shivered...

Wow, only you could take a hilarious bit of crack and turn it into something chilling. Amazing, sasuga Vix. ^_^

[myxstorie]

I love your comments so much ♥ I just went to quote my favourite little bit back at you and couldn't choose. Thank you ♥

[beltenebra]

::snuggles::

I think the thing that really makes your writing so mind-blowing is your ability to set and maintain a mood. This piece is a great example of that!

♥

p.s. I looooooove your icon.