I wanted to savour this slowly but I find myself finishing it within two days and all I can say is wow. O_O Thank you so much for writing this! I'm sure it wasn't easy with the block and all.
I'm a huge fan of this pairing and when the part when you wrote that Sehun is dead, I was "NO! Impossible! I'm sure he is alive!" and I knew it! I knew he didn't! Thank you for bringing him back! *cries* I love how you manage to cover all the descriptions of the characters, their costumes, their fighting style and their personalities through your writing. And how much pain both Sehun and Jongdae went through when they sort of lost each other simply broke my heart. The plot was action packed yet well paced and the plot twists! And the last chapter! The new heroes and their bad namings XD Such cuties, these new heroes.
Now I feel like I have re-read this again, just in case I missed out anything.
P.S. I don't know if I got it wrong, but I'm feeling a bit of Batman or even Arrow here? hahaha but I guess might be just me!
Aaaah omg thank you so much for reading and commenting! It means so much to me to know that you liked it, because i feel like i failed this fic so hard haha
You said such nice things to me, and I'll keep thanking you 'til the end of time ;; And yeah, Sehun not being dead wasn't much of a plot twist, everyone was expecting it lmao because that's me and i can only write sechen. Am i sorry for that? Definitely not :3 (I love the new heroes, they deserve a fic only for them, they're so dumb and lovely <3 I'm glad you liked them too
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*stomps in* FIRST OF ALL what is this "(VERY) MODEST PARTICIPATION" I hear when this is very clearly a PIECE of ART *huffs* And secondly *pulls up an annotated slide of your A/N* "this fic is terrible" I STRONGLY DISAGREE.
I really, really, really, very much enjoyed this fic. It took me a while to get to it and then through it but that just means I got to savour it for longer, and savour I did. I don't even know where I'm going to start.
So let's start with Port Ville??? Because HOLY SHIT. I really love the way you constructed and described it - the way you showed the side of it that was shit hole of corruption and crime, but at the same time maintained that there was still a bright side, that to ordinary citizens it was home. And to the superheroes who couldn't just ignore the dark side of it, they also couldn't ignore the bright side. It really did capture the same sort of feeling that classic comic book cities have, especially the ones from DC, really strongly. *swoons* It was amazing and immersive
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So I've been reading this for the past two day and I'm completely blown away by how amazing this was. The detail that when into describing everything that came with Jongdae's powers was beautiful, and the last two chapters leading up to Jongdae going into Sehun's mind to actually see what he's been going through all this time is just. UGH. UUUGH. So good.
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I'LL BE BACK
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thank you for writing this in spite of the awful block, it can't have been easy!
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I wanted to savour this slowly but I find myself finishing it within two days and all I can say is wow. O_O Thank you so much for writing this! I'm sure it wasn't easy with the block and all.
I'm a huge fan of this pairing and when the part when you wrote that Sehun is dead, I was "NO! Impossible! I'm sure he is alive!" and I knew it! I knew he didn't! Thank you for bringing him back! *cries* I love how you manage to cover all the descriptions of the characters, their costumes, their fighting style and their personalities through your writing. And how much pain both Sehun and Jongdae went through when they sort of lost each other simply broke my heart. The plot was action packed yet well paced and the plot twists! And the last chapter! The new heroes and their bad namings XD Such cuties, these new heroes.
Now I feel like I have re-read this again, just in case I missed out anything.
P.S.
I don't know if I got it wrong, but I'm feeling a bit of Batman or even Arrow here? hahaha but I guess might be just me!
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You said such nice things to me, and I'll keep thanking you 'til the end of time ;; And yeah, Sehun not being dead wasn't much of a plot twist, everyone was expecting it lmao because that's me and i can only write sechen. Am i sorry for that? Definitely not :3
(I love the new heroes, they deserve a fic only for them, they're so dumb and lovely <3 I'm glad you liked them too ( ... )
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And secondly *pulls up an annotated slide of your A/N* "this fic is terrible" I STRONGLY DISAGREE.
I really, really, really, very much enjoyed this fic. It took me a while to get to it and then through it but that just means I got to savour it for longer, and savour I did. I don't even know where I'm going to start.
So let's start with Port Ville??? Because HOLY SHIT. I really love the way you constructed and described it - the way you showed the side of it that was shit hole of corruption and crime, but at the same time maintained that there was still a bright side, that to ordinary citizens it was home. And to the superheroes who couldn't just ignore the dark side of it, they also couldn't ignore the bright side. It really did capture the same sort of feeling that classic comic book cities have, especially the ones from DC, really strongly. *swoons* It was amazing and immersive ( ... )
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