making messes matter ; sechen ; king!sehun

Jun 28, 2016 03:04

Title: Making messes matter
Rating: nc-17
Pairing: Sehun/Jongdae
Wordcount: 9,030
Warning: Unbetaed. VERY SELF INDULGENT. (Very badly written porn too lmao is that even porn)
Disclaimer: EXO belongs to themselves and SME
Notes: Sehun wore a crown, cla triggered my sechen feels, and nonsense happened. I'm sorry you all have to witness my failed ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, length: oneshot, pairing: jongdae/sehun, fic: exo

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lylysouz June 29 2016, 09:11:45 UTC
I'm sorry for I am not able to leave a strucured and nice comment but CHENHUN!!!!!!!!!!! B-L-E-S-S YOU FOR THIS !!!!

I like that everything is so mysterious but not too much so we can still follow the story line?
I still wonder what exactly Jongdae is. The only thing I got is that he has principles, is lethal and likes Sehun. But for the question "is he human or not?" I have no answer. It feels like he's not but at the same time he is? Does it make sense?

Anyway, as you could guess I loved it!!

Thank you for that♡

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seizethejongdae July 14 2016, 01:04:42 UTC
okA Y I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHERE TO START BECAUSE EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS IS SO GOOD SO gOOD!!!! Jongdae's characterization as a person dancing between the fringes of light and dark with so many secrets to guard was sO interesting and I loved how Sehun ended up trusting Jongdae even though he didn't know everything all the time.

And honestly your prose is just so beautiful like......whatever you write always manages to have me in actual tears because everything just strikes me so powerfully and wow...Like especially when Sehun was just asking Jongdae if this was the last time he was going to see him it literally took a second for me to tear up before Jongdae's reply calmed me down like alsdfkjdg normally I don't cry easily when I read fics but your prose is just so beautiful I always keep repeating myself but oh god I want to print this out and hang it in the Louvre your writing is actual arT ahh I'm sorry this comment was so rambly but I just loved this fic so much!!!!

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nakedglitters July 29 2016, 00:44:38 UTC
God, this is amazing! You cerainly did a great job in Jongdae's characterization! He's so myterious all throughout the story and so consistent too!

Your chenhun always leaves me in awe, thanks for writing and sharing! So much love for this ❤️

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saphyea April 15 2017, 03:17:40 UTC
I love sechen i love this au i love their characterization i love this fic everything was sooooooooo great!

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takumi_ken July 21 2018, 06:34:27 UTC

Omg! this story was great! and jongdae's chracter wow. Im speechless, im not good w words but I really love this.

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