OMG THIS IS SO NOT BAD ?!!!! What a pleasure to read this. All the while Jongin was trying to figure out Kyungsoo I was too. Their personalities fit their species so much, it is so well written! The descriptions of Kyungsoo and his actions and emotions (or perceptively lack of) are beautiful! The end scene was so vibrant and deep. It was playing out so vividly in my head. This is bad?! HELL NO. This is amazing.
You know what is amazing? You are, for leaving me such a nice comment that, I'm pretty sure of it, don't really deserve! But at least you enjoyed the ride, which is all that matters for me~ Thank you for your comment <3
I'm sorry for the grammar and vocab mistakes ;; As a non native English speaker, I know I should have all my work betaed before I post it, but I'm always scared to be a bother, so I never ask haha /sigh I'm sorry ;u;
It was my first time writing Sci-fi, and you're so right, it is a hard thing to write >< I was always worrying I wasn't putting enough information for people to actually understand what I was talking about, mff. But I'm glad you found it enough and well-balanced! Thank you so much
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wibbles...if you want...I don't mind betaing, because I love betaing, and it's nothing you have to apologize for omg it's a small piece in the whole system so it's fine!!!
sometimes things don't necessarily have to be named after the protagonists and because this is a sci-fi fic, I'm assuming that the Orion belt is the space system this takes place in, no? I'd genuinely love to see more, and read your other work besides this!!! I love it 💕💕💕 ((I'll never get tired of ur fics when I find authors I like I'm a goddamn lEECH))
My god this is a one epic story adfajshsk Kyungsoo was so hard to read at the beginning (and he still does) and that's so kyungsoo! That moment when they kissed in the cell, asfsjskh i was like YES. But when they kissed in the spaceship i was like YAAASSS kyungsoo turning golden is just the most beautiful thing i've ever read ;; Thanks for writing <3
Uuuugh thank you for reading and taking the time to comment~ I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! And that we both agree that golden Kyungsoo should really exist because damn.
hoooooly shooooot......this was absolutely amazing *o* best scifi i've read in a while and the way you portrayed kyungso...sob my beautiful tiny (who's actually tall among his kind) mush baby ...omg i love him. i'm jongin @ this tbh. (i spotted some grammar inaccuracy but it's nothing a beta can't fix so yes)
i really love this, one of the pleasant pre-christmas read one can have <333
oh yes and honorable mention to jongdae and his persona..it's so irl jongdae istg..or he would be like this i'm very sure haha
I'm sorry for the grammar ;; since I'm not a native speaker I really should find a beta but I'm always worried I'll end up bothering people. I hope it didn't ruin your reading! Thank you for your sweet words, and for taking the time to comment~ Honestly I'm also Jongin in this haha. Golden Kyungsoo, you see... Golden Kyungsoo.... anyway. And thank you for what you said about Jongdae. My precious boy <3 I loved writing him here! Thank you again for your comment~~ it really means a lot!
it's ok bb i think sncj has a special section with kind people offreing their beta-ing skills to anyone who might need it! so don't worry and go for one! ^^ they'll be only glad (and we all will be happy) <3 (oh not at all ^^ this story hella rocks and those blips are really minor thus forgivable) ;u;
looking forward to more of your stories! keep on like that c:
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Haha, but anyway, thank you for your comment ♥ I love your picture :3
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It was my first time writing Sci-fi, and you're so right, it is a hard thing to write >< I was always worrying I wasn't putting enough information for people to actually understand what I was talking about, mff. But I'm glad you found it enough and well-balanced! Thank you so much ( ... )
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sometimes things don't necessarily have to be named after the protagonists and because this is a sci-fi fic, I'm assuming that the Orion belt is the space system this takes place in, no? I'd genuinely love to see more, and read your other work besides this!!! I love it 💕💕💕 ((I'll never get tired of ur fics when I find authors I like I'm a goddamn lEECH))
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Kyungsoo was so hard to read at the beginning (and he still does) and that's so kyungsoo!
That moment when they kissed in the cell, asfsjskh i was like YES. But when they kissed in the spaceship i was like YAAASSS
kyungsoo turning golden is just the most beautiful thing i've ever read ;;
Thanks for writing <3
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Uuuugh thank you for reading and taking the time to comment~ I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! And that we both agree that golden Kyungsoo should really exist because damn.
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(i spotted some grammar inaccuracy but it's nothing a beta can't fix so yes)
i really love this, one of the pleasant pre-christmas read one can have <333
oh yes and honorable mention to jongdae and his persona..it's so irl jongdae istg..or he would be like this i'm very sure haha
excellent piece, dear author c:
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I'm sorry for the grammar ;; since I'm not a native speaker I really should find a beta but I'm always worried I'll end up bothering people. I hope it didn't ruin your reading!
Thank you for your sweet words, and for taking the time to comment~ Honestly I'm also Jongin in this haha. Golden Kyungsoo, you see... Golden Kyungsoo.... anyway. And thank you for what you said about Jongdae. My precious boy <3 I loved writing him here!
Thank you again for your comment~~ it really means a lot!
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(oh not at all ^^ this story hella rocks and those blips are really minor thus forgivable) ;u;
looking forward to more of your stories! keep on like that c:
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