Haaai, this is me trying to post luau fic at the last moment. Expect another now and a couple/three between today and tomorrow, if I manage to do everything I want to do.
Title: the dice roll so deceptively
Pairing: Desmond/Kate/Sayid
Rating: NC17
Word Count: 1837
Spoilers: up until the finale.
Warnings: well, it's a threesome and sex happens..?
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This was my main thought after that episode, too. And Des/Sayid isn't usually even my pairing, but this particular scenario was BEGGING for it!! And I wanted Kate involved/watching somehow... and you executed this PERFECTLY! Oh my god. Amazing.
When Des looks up and KNOWS she's watching? Woah. And then later in the Des POV where she just holds eye contact with him? Super hot.
Also, loved the twist that Des and Sayid had done it before and Des remembers but Sayid doesn't. I didn't see it coming, so it was just mind-blowingly great.
So so so so hot. I only really have three kinks that I get excited to read, and you hit two of them (prisoners and voyeurism) in one fic, which is incredible. Thank you thank you thank you!!!
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Anyway, I'm soo glad you found it hot! Especially because I did write my share of threesomes but never with one just watching. In theory. Also well, I was totally kinda shipping Des/Kate when he went like 'this is your little black dress, we're DATING!', so I kind of wanted to have them interact seriously in this. (Also Desmond/Sayid on the boat = kinda my canon, but in this case it also worked imo so I'm definitely happy if it worked for you, too!)
And ha, lol, I didn't know! Do I read your mind? Though I need to know the third now. (Also voyeurism? I so subscribe that.)
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