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janie_tangerine

five acts exchange round #2 - my list

Aug 28, 2010 10:39

So I really shouldn't have time for this BUT I'LL MAKE IT because I loved it last round. Also, some prompts will be recycled and others won't. Also this new banner I'm using is so shiny. <3

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five acts exchange, fanfiction, meme, writing

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Re: Lost, Frank/Miles/Richard, hookers, protectiveness [2/2] janie_tangerine August 29 2010, 00:47:59 UTC

OMG ILU. I DIDN'T KNOW I NEEDED HOOKER!FRANK IN MY LIFE BUT NOW I KNOW THAT I DO AND THIS WAS AMAZING OHDEAR. Hi, you spoil me, too. ;) Ohdear this was just so good. They're all so IC and Frank's attitude towards his previous line of work is totally spot-on. I mean, it makes sense that he'd be all 'well, it was just a job' about it but then he'd have an entire more complex feeling about it. And I loved Miles getting riled up because he totally would, and Richard's reaction was so him, too, I was gleeing so much through this. (Also er, I lol-ed at Miles playing peacemaker. Sorry, it wasn't exactly a funny situation, but. XD And when he was all 'I WANT TO GO KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOR ON YOU, FRANK' I was so gleeing.) And aww, I loved how bittersweet the ending was, but it made sense. I doubt that such a reveal would end going smoothly, right? Thank you so much, I loved iiit. <3333

(Also yeah, JEFF FAHEY WAS DAMN PRETTY.)

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The Three Musketeers, Athos/d'Artagnon, gentleness, hurt/comfort ciaimpala August 29 2010, 02:41:57 UTC

(So this is one of my favorite books of all time, and one of my favorite friendships of all time, but I haven't read it in a while, nor do I have any talent at writing historically accurate dialogue, so please excuse any suckage here ( ... )

Re: The Three Musketeers, Athos/d'Artagnon, gentleness, hurt/comfort janie_tangerine August 29 2010, 19:24:21 UTC

DUDE.

YOU WROTE ME THREE MUSKETEERS FIC AND BTW IT TOTALLY ISN'T SUCKAGE.

I really didn't have much hope that someone would pick that fandom at all AND THIS MAKES ME GLEE SO MUCH! Omg it's just lovely. And it's my otp. You rule, jsyk. And the dialogue worked just fine if you ask me. And they were adorable, and the ending totally melted me and seriously, H/C AND ATHOS/D'ARTAGNAN, I'm a happy camper. I loved it so much, thank youuu! :DDD

(also props for liking that book. it's like my second-favorite ever, not to mention a slash treasure of indecent proportions.. ;) )

Re: The Three Musketeers, Athos/d'Artagnon, gentleness, hurt/comfort ciaimpala August 29 2010, 19:49:25 UTC

Yay I'm so glad you like it!!!

When I saw that you love that book, and those two, and that you really wanted Three Musketeers and didn't think anyone would write it, I had to do it for you :)

Lost, Frank/Sun, apocalypse, protectiveness Pt. 1 aurilly August 29 2010, 18:39:38 UTC

An AU in which Sun was on the Ajira flight in the finale

Two times Frank’s found himself stuck on that crazy-ass island. Two times Frank’s managed to get himself and a bunch of other people safely off it, and now… Now he’s trapped in the zombie-freakin’-apocalypse.

Well, if that just isn’t his fucking luck.

If Frank were the kind of guy who believed in fate mumbo-jumbo stuff, he’d say that the universe has it out for him. But he isn’t. He’s a pragmatist, an optimist, the kind of guy who looks for the silver lining in every situation.

In this case, the silver lining is easy to find; it’s sitting right beside him, coolly loading a shotgun like she’s been doing it her whole life.

This time, it isn’t his fault she’s single; this time, the only person---thing?---responsible for Jin’s death has already gotten justice. She’s okay this time, at peace, able to let go. Three years have gone by (it’s always in threes, isn’t it?), which is long enough for Frank not to feel skeevy by making a move on her ( ... )

Re: Lost, Frank/Sun, apocalypse, protectiveness Pt. 2 aurilly August 29 2010, 18:40:08 UTC

“It’s your move,” he says, drunkenly scrambling to his feet in order to get more tonic water for the Tanqueray they’re drinking.

She finishes loading the shotgun with a loud click (ever since the island---the first time---she’s kept an arsenal in her apartment, because you never know, she says) and stares hazily at the board. “I’m passing Go. Collecting my $200.”

“Like you need any more money,” he quips as he refreshes her drink. “I’ve already got three houses mortgaged to you.” They probably shouldn’t be doing this, not with the dull roar of chaos wafting up to where they sit, fifteen stories above it all, not with the news stations going dark one by one as the studios get attacked. But this is, sort of, what he came for, what he’s been dreaming of for too many years, and he’ll be damned if he lets anything, even the zombie-pocalypse---especially the zombie-pocalypse---get in his way. If he’s going to die, he might as well go out in style, living the dream ( ... )

Re: Lost, Frank/Sun, apocalypse, protectiveness Pt. 2 janie_tangerine August 29 2010, 19:33:47 UTC

... you're awesome.

No, seriously, YOU HAD FRANK KILLING A ZOMBIE WITH FLOWERS. I think that if I don't force myself to be coherent I'll just flail to you about that. But it was such genius and such... such a thing I could totally envision him doing. Frank killing zombies with flowers. GOD IT'S SO BRILLIANT.

Also, you totally... er... hit my kind-of-really-weird-vanilla-kink that would be people playing board games. Especially Monopoly. Oh dear the dialogue was so brilliant in that bit. Though it was everywhere really. Your Frank voice is spectacular, and I just love the he wanted to court her the old-fashioned way. AND SUN HAD AN ARSENAL AND SHOOTS AT ZOMBIES. That's so FIERCE. Oh dear you might have turned me into a hardcore Frank/Sun shipper with this. Also I loved them kissing at the end and how this was basically optimistic (as Frank is!) while there's a zombie apocalypse going on. In conclusion, this is brilliant and you're amazing and I love it to pieces. <3333 thank youuu!! :D

Re: Lost, Frank/Sun, apocalypse, protectiveness Pt. 2 aurilly August 31 2010, 23:35:47 UTC

Yay! So glad you liked it! I have no idea where it came from. Such crack. And I had no idea you had a board game kink (I do, too!). That was one of my favorite scenes of the series---Sawyer, Hurley and Locke playing board games in Dharmaville, and then Frank and Miles playing cards in season 6. And Frank would totally be optmistic and sunny and level-headed even in the zombie-apocalypse. That's why he's so awesome.

Sun is totally fierce. That's why Frank lurves her.

So glad you liked it!

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Re: Lost, Miles/Richard, Gentleness/Protectiveness, PG-13 janie_tangerine August 31 2010, 00:10:46 UTC

Awwww THIS WAS AMAZING, thank you! :D I just loved how you approached the prompt, with both of them being protective of each other. It makes so much sense, and they're so precious I can't even. <333 Also your Miles voice is spot-on, I could so hear him in this. And Miles having freaks out about Richard being nostalgic and trying to shrug his uneasiness off was just gold. Also ha, Richard selling him cheesy bullshit lines was brilliant. XD Miles, you know you like it. Also Richard not knowing about Bond movies but knowing a whole lot about sex felt so IC. In conclusion I really loved it, thanks so very much! :DDDD

Re: Lost, Miles/Richard, Gentleness/Protectiveness, PG-13 aurilly August 31 2010, 23:57:51 UTC

LOVE THIS! Love the line about Richard being such a grandpa, and Miles being terrified of Richard killing himself. Gorgeous.

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Re: SPN; Dean/Castiel -- gentleness/protectiveness, hookers (NC-17) janie_tangerine August 30 2010, 23:16:59 UTC

OMGOMGOMG MY PLANS OF GOING TO BED HAVE BEEN RE-PLANNED. MEANING I'M READING THIS RIGHT THE FUCK NOW OMG. <33333333333333333333