fic, Lost: Half Of My Heart (Juliet, Miles, pre Sawyer/Juliet), PG

[janie_tangerine]

Title: Half Of My Heart
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairing: Juliet, Miles, Sawyer (pre Sawyer/Juliet)
Words: 1330
Summary: “Is someone having an existential crisis?” Miles asks as he sits where Sawyer had sat last time they were here, wearing one of those hideous jumpsuits, and Juliet lets out a small breath of relief.
Spoilers: up until 5x08.

Comments

[ozmissage]

Awww! I LOVE this. I've always wondered what would make Juliet stay and this feels absolutely right. Like you said, the real world is great, but not so much if you're totally alone.

Miles as the voice of reason was amazing! You write his brand of snarky sincerity so well. Miles & Juliet together always make me incredibly happy, so I started squeeing like crazy the minute he showed up. :D

And the Juliet/Sawyer of all was beautifully done. I love fic that deals with the early days of their relationship. The fact that he didn't pressure her to stay was perfect. Having it be 100% Juliet's idea is exactly how it should be.

As if this fic wasn't already awesome enough you went and left me with the mental image of Sawyer cooking Juliet breakfast! AMAZING. Thank you so, so much for this!

[janie_tangerine]

Eee, thanks so much! :D I'm so glad that it was fitting, especially because I think that I'm crap at writing Juliet like half of the time or something. ;)

Also ha, I so couldn't resist relationship!counselor!Miles, even if he's not exactly that happy about it I think. ;) ;) Also writing him is always so fun, so it's so good to know he worked for you here. And that you liked the Juliet/Sawyer too because I write them like once in a blue moon but I like to know it was a slow build and that he wouldn't want to pressure her into doing anything.

Thank you again!! <33333

[janie_tangerine]

Eee, thanks! I'm so glad that you liked it, and lots of Miles always makes everything better, right? Thank you again for reading!

[gottalovev]

I'm at a point that a header that has Miles and Sawyer makes me click. MILES! ahem. I love what you did here! such a nice portrait of Juliet. And your miles is fantastic. I love that Sawyer doesn't try to convince Juliet to stay and that it's what does the trick! lovely!

[janie_tangerine]

Eeee, thank you! :D I'm so glad that you liked it, and Juliet especially because I never understand if I get her right or not. Also writing Miles is always a blast. ;) Thanks again! Also Miles and Sawyer in one thing is totally a more than worthy reason to click on a header. ;)

[aurilly]

Aw, this is lovely! MILES. Why so awesome? There needs to be more Miles+Juliet fic in the world. I love his Led Zepplin thing, I love his advice. I love how he refers to Charlotte. I love his cranky yet sweet self.

Great job!

[janie_tangerine]

Ee, thank you! :D I'm so glad that you liked it. :D And yeah, Miles and Juliet is an underrated combination, isn't it? And I'm so glad Miles worked for you in this. Thank you again!