fic, Lost: I've Been Everywhere 13/14 (Sawyer, Jack, ensemble), PG13

[janie_tangerine]

Title: I've Been Everywhere 13/14
Rating: PG-13, will reach NC17 overall (-> next chapter)
Characters for this part: Sawyer, Jack, Desmond, Penny, Michael, Walt, Bernard, Rose.
Word counting: 6804 this part, 50000 ca overall.
Disclaimer: Lost is not mine and all the folk songs used here are not mine. The places really exist and I've never been

Comments

[elliotsmelliot]

Ah sniff. This is almost over. I love what you added to this section. There is a new tenderness to their interactions that I think really works as a great reminder of where they’ve been and where their going.

They get off the train maybe three or four hours later; they don’t say anything in that frame of time even if their hands hadn’t really moved, but it’s fine enough. Jack figures that sometimes silence speaks for itself; it feels like something has shifted within them, but it’s a positive shift.I really like this passage. It’s the type of gesture you could pretend to ignore as you are trying to figure it out

[janie_tangerine]

It is almost over indeed! Well, now I just need to go editing some stuff for the last one but then that's it. Ha, I'm kind of sad to see it go actually, I can't believe I've started it five months ago.

Waaaalt does never get old indeed! I don't know what is with me and Walt but lately I've been wanting him in whenever I could manage. Even if I guess that here his patience with Michael is kind of worn out already. ;) And the Des/Penny reunion was mandatory! Or at least I decided it was.

Glad that you liked the changes in there! And that one could see the dancing because I always think it's the kind of thing I can't describe for my own good. Also, Gabriella was probably the only woman that was with Jack who I kind of liked so I figured I'd go with her. Thanks so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! And thanks for the good wishes with the last edit, I hope to get it done this evening or tomorrow.

[jaydblu]

Then suddenly Sawyer’s hand is on his shoulder and Jack doesn’t even think about shrugging it away; it feels good, pretty much, and he doesn’t feel up to renounce it. He surprises himself when his own hand ends up on Sawyer’s knee but he isn’t shrugged away either and he keeps it there.
Oh, and the subtle touching begins. :)

Rose and Bernard, yay!

Desmond is still down there, saying fine another one, but last chapter for today; Jack had personally found Dickens pretty boring when he read some book of his ages ago, but maybe it’s because he had to read it himself.Personally, Dickens bores me too, but I believe I could listen to Desmond read the whole book with no problem! I can see how people would be enthralled with someone reading to them

[janie_tangerine]

Subtle touching indeed! It will get better than subtle though, I swear! ;)

Rose and Bernard win at life, I had to have them in.

Dickens is the most boring writer ever. I started at least five of his books and the best I came was half of the Pickwick Papers, but I never could finish one. Of course if Des reads it to me I'm not complaining at all!

Waaaaaalt! ;) I just couldn't not. ;) ;)

Oh, good that the reunion had the epic feeling to it! I was kinda aiming for it so good to hear that.

Sure that we know better. Like hell he was just wanting to see the technique, I'm not writing het here! Well, okay, I'm still technically gen but it's changing in a veeery short while. I'm actually editing the porn on the last one so I definitely hope you enjoy it when I post it (which would be later today I hope), thank you so much!! ♥

[faran1078]

"Jack doesn’t really have a problem with crying in public." NFK - It's become the standard LOST drinking game!

Love the WAAAAAAALLLLLLLT! So funny.

When Jack went for the phone I really thought you were going to have the Des/Penny phone call. Heck, you could even have skewed the timeline so that it was Christmas Eve. Though I guess that timing would have been awkward for the Sawyer/Jack part of the story as that could easily have lead to...MORE on their part.

[janie_tangerine]

LOL, Lost drinking game indeed! Even if I don't mind Jack crying. Hell, I identify most times.

Ha, I wish I could have made it on Christmas Eve! But if I wanted those other two to hook up in the spring I couldn't skip one entire year. No, I was going for the full reunion... you know, has effect. ;) Glad you liked it! And Walt is always good comic relief!

[alemyrddin]

awww, what a beautiful reunion!
I am crying too. :)

Sawyer encouraging Jack to have fun was so sweet, too. :)

[janie_tangerine]

Glad you liked that! I couldn't not. I mean, it was in canon, I have it too. It's a question of principle.

Ha, glad you liked that bit, thanks!