fic, Lost: And He Left My Heart With Vertigo (Boone/Charlie), NC17, for un_love_you

Oct 30, 2008 20:46

Title: And He Left My Heart With Vertigo
Characters/Pairing: Boone/Charlie
Rating: NC17
Disclaimer: come on, you really think such stuff wouldn't be canon if Lost was mine?
Word count: 4200
Spoilers: pre-series, so none apart from the basic biography of the characters.
Summary: This groupie is a he and usually he-groupies choose Liam. Not him. When ( Read more... )

character: charlie pace, fanfiction:lost, pairing: boone/charlie, table: un_love_you, character: boone carlyle

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elliotsmelliot October 30 2008, 23:19:44 UTC
Wow! Wow! I think this is the hottest story you’ve ever written.

You have such great physical descriptions of Boone. He comes across as half angelic, but not enough to disperse the idea that he would not be on his knees with a stranger. I almost felt bad for Charlie here, with all his insecurities about Liam coming through. You did a great job weaving this type of characterization in between the senseless joy that comes with sex. I also thought it was in character for the two of them to discuss logistics from the legal aspect and condoms before rushing into the second act. I will have to imagine that in this universe, Charlie never tries drugs, and Boone gets over Shannon (despite liking blondes) and they never have any reason to board Flight 815. Of course in this world Boone appears again at one of Charlie’s solo shows. Yay!

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janie_tangerine October 31 2008, 08:34:06 UTC
*blushes* Thank you! I'm flattered. Really. And it's all Boone's fault, not mine! He makes things hot by just being there! ;)

I just can't see Charlie as someone who wouldn't freak out in such a situation, apart from his Liam issues. And while on the island/with established relationship one can skip over the condom business, I guess I couldn't here so I'm really glad it came out as IC. And since this can't be canon (if it was Charlie would have been WAY more embarrassed in the fish scene in Walkabout I guess) I'll definitely buy your take, erase any flight they could have taken and definitely concur of Boone showing up at the solo show. Thank you so much again, I'm really glad you liked it!

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falafel_musings October 31 2008, 11:30:44 UTC
Love this! I agree with ell; this is some of the hottest sex you've ever written. I loved how clumsy and youthful it was. All the messy details made it more realistic and that's hot. I like that Charlie gets to top Boone (Charlie doesn't top often!), but even so Boone is more sexually confident and pushy. It nicely subverts the typical rockstar/fan roles. Boone is definitely not your average groupie! I loved that Charlie nicknames him 'His Prettiness'. He sounds like royalty ( ... )

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falafel_musings October 31 2008, 11:33:26 UTC
PS - extra points for 'boys in eyeliner'. Definitely one of my kink spots!

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janie_tangerine October 31 2008, 12:59:29 UTC
Eyeliner is good! Hey, it's close to crossdressing, right? ;)

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janie_tangerine October 31 2008, 13:05:29 UTC
Thank you so much! And glad you found it hot, that makes me feel very accomplished. And that while the sex worked, it was IC. You know, I have this idea that Boone doesn't like to top but is absolutely confident in sexual matters, so it made sense that he would be the one being more sure and confident about the whole thing. No, he isn't your average groupie indeed! And heee, I call Ian S. His Prettiness. I just passed my nickname to Charlie but it's just so fitting, isn't it? ;)

I'm really glad that Charlie came through IC. I just can't see the guy as fully enjoying the fame-sex-drugs etc. style and I figured that whenever he had backstage sex it'd have turned into confrontation with Liam. And I just can't not reference to his confession habit, but hey, after that scene in The Moth I figured I should address the issue.

Boone likes a bit of rough! Blonde rough. But also because Charlie cares about the music.Heee, that exactly. Apart from that, I always thought that Boone would do one night stands/random sex, but not with exactly ( ... )

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janie_tangerine October 31 2008, 13:12:52 UTC
No, I love you. Seriously. This totally made my day, you know? ♥

I'm really so happy you liked it this much! I just had the idea, run away with it and thought it was good enough, but I guess that groupie!Boone has something that does the trick ;)

Oh, I want to squish the pair of them, too. Usually ;) And I'm glad the dynamic made sense, I just can't see Charlie as someone being uber-confident about the whole backstage sex business while I always thought that Boone is confident in that sense. And that he manages to be in control even if he doesn't like topping (in my canon of course) ;)

You know what, I think I need to write some sequel to this thing where he does go solo. Because yeah, they would have been good for each other in that sense and you're totally right on Boone needing someone to look after. And Charlie would definitely fit the bill more than Shannon ever would ;) I buy your and elliot's interpretation, too. Happily ever after all the way!

t'd be so good for him and so much healthier than trailing around after Liam and ( ... )

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haldoor November 2 2008, 06:59:25 UTC
OH! Hot! I don't usually go for Charlie so much, but I love how you seem to have captured him here; he really seems very IC. And Boone, as ever, is gorgeous! The sex was very hot too! ;-)

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janie_tangerine November 2 2008, 09:44:39 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm really glad you liked it! Even if it's not your usual pairing (well, isn't mine either but I have my soft spot for it and I couldn't resist the setting ;) ). And I'm so really glad to hear that Charlie seemed IC, I always freak out too much when I try to write him. Thanks again! ♥

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hendercats November 16 2008, 00:03:13 UTC
(Reading for LFA...) Normally Charlie doesn't push my buttons, but I love how clearly you paint the beginning in this - where he's wondering why this guy is with him ... but he can't come close to thinking straight because Boone's mouth is on him.

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janie_tangerine November 16 2008, 07:30:18 UTC
Thank you for taking a chance on this even if Charlie isn't your usual cup of tea! I love the guy but I don't write him half as much as I'd like so I'm really glad you thought he was IC here. I have my soft spot for the pairing ;) thank you so much again!

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