fic, Lost: Room Without Love (Charlie/Claire), PG13, for hopelessfangirl

Aug 19, 2008 23:43

That'd be the first of the fics-written-clandestinely-on-my-mom's-laptop. And I'm almost caught up with the luau stuff, I just miss four or five people and two are getting their gift tomorrow or the day after, if I manage.

Title: Room Without Love
Rating: PG13
Pairing: Charlie/Claire
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Disclaimer: If Lost was mine it'd never have come ( Read more... )

luau fic, character: claire littleton, character: charlie pace, fanfiction:lost, pairing: charlie/claire

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janie_tangerine August 19 2008, 22:36:04 UTC
LOL, your Juliet/Claire obsession has rubbed on me!! I don't know whether I could write it actually but I'm always sneaking them in when there's the chance and it's all your fault! ;)

Seriously, thanks so much, I'm really glad you liked this! I really don't feel confident with both Claire and the pairing so it's great to hear it worked and that the point worked. Thanks so much again! ♥ ♥

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glycerineclown August 20 2008, 01:54:18 UTC
*snuggles you with a stupid smile*

That made me so happy.

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janie_tangerine August 20 2008, 10:33:42 UTC
*snuggles back* thank you! Glad it did so ;)

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janie_tangerine August 20 2008, 10:34:49 UTC
Thanks! I should quote you and say a certain other person, too, but since I kept on with it I guess I don't have a say in the matter. But yeah, it was much better with Charlie there. Thanks again, glad you liked this!

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meagan4dominic August 20 2008, 06:31:06 UTC
Wow that was wonderful. I seriously cannot believe that's your first time writing Clarie. That was incredible. I think that you got Clarie spot on right & the conversation she had with Charlie was so great, I could hear his voice in my head.
That was really great, I really want you to write more CC!

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janie_tangerine August 20 2008, 13:59:05 UTC
You're way too nice to me. Thank you so much! And yeah, that was my first shot at Claire indeed ;) I'm really glad you liked the conversation, I find Charlie dialogue so hard to write that it's not even funny so it totally made me happy to hear it worked ;) thanks so much again, I'll surely won't pass another CC bunny if it comes!

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elliotsmelliot August 20 2008, 13:53:27 UTC
This was sweet, just like the pairing strives to be. I liked the details of the forget-me-not wallpaper. (Of course, the reference to the zombie club had me wondering what Boone and Charlie had been getting up to prior to Claire's delayed grief.)

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janie_tangerine August 20 2008, 14:00:02 UTC
Thank you! It's really not my usual cup of tea so good to hear it worked! (and well, about the club activities, Claire doesn't need to know what goes on in the reunions, does she? *shifty eyes*) ;)

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