Supernatural drabble: prompt #29 the elephant in the room

[jane_lane18]

He appears suddenly. His face, his build have changed, but the eyes are always the same.

He watches from the doorway holding flowers. The baby shifts in her arms, and she can almost feel the weight of the man's eyes on him.

“For Sam,” he says, lips twisted into a smile as he lays the flowers down.  She watches her baby sleep, ignoring both him and

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[iamstealthyone]

“They’re Nasturtiums," she whispers, for conquest, victory in battle.

Such an unsettling moment for Mary. No matter how much doesn't want any of this to be happening, it is. It's sad to think she can't confide in John about it.

Nicely done.

[jane_lane18]

Thanks! I'm glad that it came across clearly, I was a little worried it was too vague.

I keep coming back to that scene in AHBL and the secret she kept-wondering what she went through, what she felt. We know so little about it and it's so interesting.

[iamstealthyone]

Yeah, I'm hoping we get a lot more info on Mary this season.

[jane_lane18]

Thanks!

[tahirire]

OOh, this sent a chill up my spine.

Perfectly understated creepiness.

His face, his build have changed, but the eyes are always the same.

Show up alot, does he? Bastard. *shakes fist*

for conquest, victory in battle.

Aaand, there's where the chill came it.

Well done!

[jane_lane18]

Thanks!

He does get around, too much!

Nasturtiums are such pretty flowers, they're even edible. I like the idea of taking something that can be positive and twisting it.

[em615]

I liked it. Well done!

[jane_lane18]

Thank you!
I promise I'll read your fic tonight.

[em615]

Not a problem. I'm busy writing the sequel already, which J will then have to beta! She's good at that! :D

[jenshih_blue]

So haunting and sad especially in light of last nights episode.

[jane_lane18]

Thanks!