Comments | jane2005: Best bad!fic line of the week

jane2005

Best bad!fic line of the week

Jun 07, 2007 21:42

Brian looked at Justin’s hand in his and was grateful for how things were molding up.

Brian and Justin. Meant to be moldy.

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jaiden_s June 8 2007, 01:45:40 UTC

There's a fungus among us.

jane2005 June 8 2007, 01:48:42 UTC

It clings! It clings!

vlredreign June 8 2007, 01:49:00 UTC

OMFG!!!! I need that icon!!!

vlredreign June 8 2007, 01:48:33 UTC

Jane, maybe they were Justin's studio, doing that Ghost/Unchained Melody thing with the clay.

Yeah.

*nods*

jane2005 June 8 2007, 01:49:40 UTC

Yeah, I can totally see how the writer would confuse "moldy" with "melody" - all the same letters.

*nods with you*

charley_ryan June 8 2007, 01:55:24 UTC

*Dies*

jane2005 June 8 2007, 02:00:28 UTC

Excellent icon! The sad thing is, I think she was trying to say that things were coming together in Teh Relationshit. I don't think English is her first language, which is why I haven't highlighted some of her stuff (it would be like shooting puppies) - but that was just priceless.

I won't comment on how this means that the bad!fic has eaten my brain.

charley_ryan June 8 2007, 02:42:56 UTC

I won't comment on how this means that the bad!fic has eaten my brain.

Like syphilis!! *Stabz DanRon*

jane2005 June 8 2007, 02:57:41 UTC

DIE COWLIP DIE DIE DIE!!!

epicallytired June 8 2007, 01:58:52 UTC

now that's a beautiful expression of the love.

jane2005 June 8 2007, 02:01:30 UTC

Isn't it?

epicallytired June 8 2007, 02:11:18 UTC

well, they hold hands so much that maybe after several days of not being able to let go because OMG SOOOOO IN LUV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11 that they get moldy...

'cause, you know, Brian's not OCD/anal about cleanliness or anything...

jane2005 June 8 2007, 02:17:23 UTC

OR! You know, maybe they're so enamored of each other and the fucking is so addictive that they're unable to leave bed and let the cum crust up all over them and it starts to, like, grow spores.

And, yay! I get to use my new icon just for this fic writer!

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meimur June 8 2007, 02:03:45 UTC

That is a beautiful piece of writing right there!

jane2005 June 8 2007, 02:09:56 UTC

And this is the very next line:

For the last three weeks Justin had been in a piss off mood.

What, exactly, does that mean? I'm getting these really strange visions of Justin peeing uncontrollably.

Or does that mean, he wants to enter peeing contests?