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jamster74

A Second Chance Part 21 B

Jan 03, 2014 12:31

Emma had been driving around aimlessly for hours now. The various hues of bottle green and grey that had filled the sky earlier had now morphed into an endless sea of black. The once bustling sidewalk that filled the air with the happy, loud buzz of the excited pedestrians was now eerily silent. The only steadily beaming lights now came from the ( Read more... )

jemma, hahe, jenny and emma

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ptcruz January 3 2014, 18:50:59 UTC

Ok....really liked this part. Can totally see Emma having this 'argument' with herself. Hopefully Luzi will be around to help Em realize her feelings and not
push Jenny away again.

anonymous January 4 2014, 02:46:59 UTC

Great chapter Jamster. I hope we won't have to wait too much longer for the next one... (sorry, don't mean to be pushy; I just love your writing!).

mxc

llanipsaammeg January 4 2014, 21:58:37 UTC

Do you know what I really like about this? Apart from being really interesting (obviously :)), I like the way its written. You get so much of what Emma is thinking, its kind of like as I'm reading, I feel like I'm in her head and all around her... and the sky turning from bottle green to black... awww yusss!

lazerbug2006 January 4 2014, 23:05:13 UTC

Emma, "emma-ing" with herself is so typical! I hope she will stop and think about her true feelings instead of listening to her fears! AWSOME update, and I can't wait for more :)

partoetorno March 1 2014, 22:22:45 UTC

"Why did Jenny have to kiss me? Emma wondered bitterly. Why did she have to completely ruin our friendship? We had just started being closer friends"

So many questions... So many fears.... I suppose there is still a long path for Emma to realize what she really feels for Jenny ....
But in the end I think that she will show her how much she loves her :)