A Second Chance 16

[jamster74]

The pounding on the door continued to get louder. Emma swallowed back her fear and stood up from the couch. She slowly walked a few feet towards the front door to see who was there. She only made it a several steps before the door to Jenny’s bedroom flew open. Emma turned her head and froze mid-step. Her eyes widened and her mouth fell open. Warmth

Comments

[jonah86]

An amazing update thank you! This has the real feeling of a thriller. I'm reading this and quite honestly when I turn off the light tonight I am sure I will dream about Ben banging at my door. Scary but awesome. A very talented fic writer. :)

More please!

[anonymous]

Great update! Can't wait for the next chapter to appear!

mxc

[ptcruz]

Wow!!! And you've been keeping this from us???? Great update!!!! =)

[anonymous]

Thank you for the new chapter. This version of Emma is strong-hearted. Jenny is vulnerable. I like this combination. We can rely on Emma for protection of Jenny. I hope that things take a turn for the better in the next chapter.

[noname44]

Ahh, what a cliffhanger. I need to know whats going to happen!