A Second Chance Part 11

May 23, 2013 07:00

Thanks to my beta.

Jenny held the door open for Emma as the two of them walked outside of the bank onto the sidewalk. Emma thanked Jenny and quickly fell in step next to her as they walked away from the bank.

“Where are we going?” Emma asked curiously.

Jenny smiled slightly, her excitement beginning to grow. “It’s this small park a few blocks ( Read more... )

jemma, hahe, jenny and emma

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ptcruz May 23 2013, 16:32:40 UTC
Really great chap. Love that they get along so well! Luzi is Jenny's fav singer?! Tooo funnny!!! If Jenny would just let Emma talk...they wouldn't fight all the time. Sheesh!
But maybe now Jenny will learn to think before she speaks and give Emma the chance to talk too. If Emma lets her near her again ;)

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hpeek04 May 23 2013, 17:55:09 UTC
Poor Emma! Just when she thinks she can talk to Jenny, she gets let down again. I hope this won't be the end of her and Jenny though and she can find a way to forgive her! Patiently awaiting more :) Great job!!!

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anonymous May 23 2013, 21:27:25 UTC
I LOVE the direction this story is going! Can't wait for the next chapter!

mxc

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partoetorno May 24 2013, 05:30:37 UTC
oh, jenny's world is cramble down...piece by piece..moment after moment under Emma's spell... and Emma is one of the reason she will have to start brand new her life ( ... )

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lazerbug2006 May 26 2013, 19:47:09 UTC
The lunch started out so good but ended so sour :( Jenny always goes on the defense without thinking she is Emma's boss! I can't wait to see where this goes next!!!! AWESOME update :)

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