A Second Chance Part 8

Apr 14, 2013 13:53

This chapter is unbetaed. So any mistakes are mine.

Emma knocked on the door to Jenny’s office and listened intently for any sound coming from behind the door. A moment later Emma heard a soft voice say “Come in”. Emma turned the door knob and pushed the door open. When she came in her gaze immediately fell on Jenny who was sitting at her desk ( Read more... )

jemma, hahe, jenny and emma

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ptcruz April 14 2013, 18:23:10 UTC
OH no!!! I'm happy that Jenny may get her wish....but then that would take her away from Emma!!!!

It was cute how Emma worried if Jenny would be mad at her for having Hotte help her. Still she must have done something in the past for Hotte to
think Jenny would fire Emma.

Nice update!!

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hpeek04 April 14 2013, 19:29:47 UTC
WOW, great job Liv! Poor Emma, so scared that she will make Jenny upset again. I'm also curious as to why Hotte told Emma about Jenny being mean though, she seems to be so genuine and sweet(after her mini-meltdown that is!) Ugh, and I kinda hope Jenny gets what she wants...but only if she can find a way to be near Emma ;) Can't wait for more!!!

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lazerbug2006 April 14 2013, 22:17:07 UTC
I am glad Jenny is happy about possibly getting fired but what about Emma??!!!!! LOL! I want more...please?! AWESOME update :)

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anonymous April 15 2013, 05:41:01 UTC
I have to repeat that this is really a new type of Jemma fic. Thrilling, full of suspence! I can guess nothing that would happen in following scenes. I was surprised that the girls felt nothing romantic even at the second (third?) meeting. They are thinking and talking only about business relationship! This is realistic. Probably I'm too used to mutual attraction at the first meeting. Because of my poor English. I'm afraid that you take this comment as negative or sarcastic. My admiration for your originality and brave try is genuine. Waiting excitedely for the next chapter.

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jamster74 April 17 2013, 11:11:48 UTC
First off, I don't take your comment negatively or sarcastic at all!! I thank you for leaving a comment! I thought I would try a new kind od story, a challenge you could say, I'm not sure how well it will turn out, but I think it's important to try!! I'm glad you are enjoying this story though, it makes me happy to see that people are enjoying what I write!!! Thank you for your comment!!! :)

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anonymous April 15 2013, 09:00:42 UTC
I am totally sucked into this story, and can't wait for the next installment!

mxc

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jamster74 April 17 2013, 11:12:33 UTC
Thank you so much!!! I'm very happy to see you like it! :)

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