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[jamesmfan]

Title: Inescapable
Characters/Pairings: Naomi/Emily
Rating: PG
Warnings: Swearing
Summary: Set at some stage after the Love Ball. Inside Naomi’s head. Not such a sunshiny place to be. The difficulties of being in a relationship for the first time

Comments

[likeits4ever]

Wow. This really was beautiful and your got inside Naomi's head perfectly. Like someone else mentioned I'm slowing coming around the fact that Naomi went and cheated on Emily and this fic opns my eyes more so to how Naomi could of been feeling as Emily was blissfully unaware.....but yes beautifully written and I hope to see more from you?

[a_lil_nothing]

i adore naomi, the good and bad stuff. great fic. thanks

[night_musings]

You paint a thorough picture of Naomi, capturing so much left unsaid in the first couple episodes of S4. Naomi was never a simplistic character and you got her right. I like your meloditc writing style. Lovely.

[lil_c80]

You captured Naomi's feeling pretty well. I can imagine her feeling trapped. But I still can't grasp the fact that she actually cheated on Emily. I wished she would have stopped it.

[anonymous]

Thanks for the new chapter of Brave New World!! Enjoy the story